The story threads - put your storys here!

[Blazeon]

Hay you guys i thought that i might do something new on here!

this thread is for you to make up a story, or right something like a story that has happened to you or you know about and i will rate it from 1 - 10 (1 being absoloute crap, and 10 being really really awesome!) so stat righting stories on here and i will try to rate every one you right!

[Lukario]

Baby-My Cat


I typed this in MS Word


Baby might seem like any other house cat, but to me, Baby is one of the greatest presents I ever received. My mom got
Baby when she was about three months old; she was a stray cat that had been left to fend for herself. When my mom brought home the fuzzy cat, I was kind of shocked. I really didn’t have a lot of experience with animals, but then I saw baby, I knew that she was going to stay. The exact day I got Baby is long forgotten, but it was around four years ago.
Baby is a black, white, and gray tabby cat with one green eye and one brown one. Baby pretty much will get along with anybody as long as they are not aggressive. Baby does scratch and bit if you don’t give her enough room. She is very lovable and very funny. She learned how to climb up the ladder in my room and looks so adorable when she lies on her back. When she sees you, she will usually “meow” as to signal a hello. Baby loves attention and I really bond with her. She will usually sleep in my bed at night and will purr the second she sees me. I’ve really learned to love Baby and I hope that she likes me.


Baby gets really irritated when she sees another cat at the door. Baby likes to be the only cat in the house and doesn’t like some other cat on her turf. It’s really funny because she is a very jealous cat and will give the other cat a message saying that she is “top-cat”. When my mom brought home her latest cat, a gray and white shorthair named Zoe, Baby beat her up a lot. I got really mad at Baby for doing that. Once, Baby got out and beat up Zoe so bad that my mom had to take her to the pet hospital because of all the cuts. Let’s just say Baby got in big trouble. Baby loves attention and won’t let any other cat take her place.



My mom ended up separating the two cats and now they run on a time shift that has been taking place for a couple of years now. Zoe gets to be out during the day and Baby gets to be out at night and that is when she usually is with me. My mom calls it the “Kitty Shuffle” since we constantly have to find a way to get Baby into my sister’s room. My mom is always saying, “go find Baby and get her in her room so we can let out the cat.” I think Baby just needs to learn how to accept other cats and learn to behave. That would be something I would like for Baby to learn, to “like” Zoe and not think of her as a menace and rather as a “friend”.


Thanks,
Lukario

[Blazeon]

Very good lukario , very good description and a entertaining paragraph i giv it a 8 and a half!

Bravo!!

[dude11]

hay I'll tell you mine mate.

hi I'm dude11.<<thats it

[Lukario]

0 / 10

Thanks,
Lukario

[iceman12]

lol:laugh:

[Blazeon]

0/10 soz you gotta include a few more paragraphs and maybe talk about something reall or a longer story!

But hi anyways!!

[Blazeon]

Wo!!! did i inspire you to make this new posting area if i did , your welcome for the idea!

Awesome!

[Cheetah]

Yes by golly, you did help me to throw this little board idea together, thanks for that.

I'm thinking we need some role-play threads and was gonna start one but, dang, lots of work to do here and you know ... work before play .. lol


Enjoy the board .. am eager to see some sweet stories come outta here!

[Lukario]

I'd be surprised if anyone here even knew what role playing is. I am a member of one, but have no idea how to do it.

Thanks,
Lukario

[Cheetah]

Well by golly .. I'll just have to make it my mission to teach ya all how to roleplay then .. lol

but we digress .. this is a thread for stories and I would love to see some stores posted here as well. :TooHappy:

[Nintendolover]

I'm writing a book, so I'll tell you chapter 1. Tell me what you think.

My life is tottally normal. I go to school, have an annoying little brother. Only difference is I have a band. So,you'd think nothing out of the ordanary would happen to me. Well then, your way off. Let's start from the begining.
One day, a Saturday. To be more presice, it was Saturday, July 17, 2007. I was 16 and that day I was going to a Fergie concert with front row seats and a VIP back stage pass. And right after that we would be the opening act
for Akon. We (my band and me) were freaking out last nightat the skating rink. Then, this morrning when I when I woke up, I went to get dressed, do my hair and my make-up, but the cloths I laid out for the day (Fergie's concert and then Akon's), were all gone, and replaced with my mother's dresses (the ugly ones). And I didn't wear dresses, I'm one of those punky teens. My car was even done in a punky way.
"Mom, where are my cloths," I yelled the need to know question?
"Where ever you left them," she replied.
"Is Aaron awake," I asked so that maybe, I would know.
"Yes," and with this respose of my mother I ran downstairs (still in my night cloths).
When I found him I yelled," Where are my cloths!"
"I don't know," he replied just about crying.
"Where are my cloths," I screamed almost in his ear!
"Okay,okay," he started, crying,"there in my room. The top of my night stand, just please put me down."
So, I dropped him flat on his butt, ran up stairs and gathered my cloths. I put on the one for the day, put the others in a back pack, and tose the back pack into a heep of stuff that needed to be put in my car last night. Then I had to jet off at the last second and didn't even have the heep in the car yet. I had to rush. The band was meeting at the mall for lunch, then we were going to the concert. I had the tickets, mics., amd I was the lead singer. I quickly got heep into my car.
I got to the mall (and them) right before chow time.

[Lukario]

It is pretty good, but I think you need to fix the punctuation and the formatting of the way you type it.

Thanks,
Lukario

[Cheetah]

Wow! some really nice stories here! keep up the good work everyone!

[Nintendolover]

It is pretty good, but I think you need to fix the punctuation and the formatting of the way you type it.

Thanks,
Lukario

Thanks. I will. I just have 2 get word on my computer, then I will.

[Blazeon]

preety good better than that dude 11 or whoever did that 3 word one!!

im gunnu rate it a solid 7 and a half!

bravoo good show , hope to see more of your chapters on here!

[Nintendolover]

Sorry. You have 2 wait. I'm going 2 try 2 sale the book when it's done.

[Lukario]

It takes money to publish a book you know.

Thanks,
Lukario

[Nintendolover]

So, when I'm done with this book, I'll have the money.

[Lukario]

If you think so. No reason to stop an aspiring author.\

Thanks,
Lukario

[Nintendolover]

How much per book?

[Lukario]

I really don't know based per book, since I really don't deal with things like that. Last post for me here.

Thanks,
Lukario

[Nintendolover]

Okay.

[Blazeon]

whats your book going to be called anyways?

[Nintendolover]

My Life As A Rock Star. I had another version but, it was just flat out crap. So one day at school I just started writing a new 1. This ones going 2 be great. I have 3 or 4 chapters so far. i just need 2 get on my sis's computer again.

[maconaquah]

before u sell it can u make a new thread and write it there:TooHappy:

AND GOOD STORY!!!!

[GameInventor]

Well, I have a story and it is about 15 sheets of paper long so if anyone wants to see it just email me, Delnith@yahoo.com The name of the story is called Secrets, Most people put things on the back describing the story so ill do it here
Vaan is just a citizen in Falcon Reach, but one day his parents dissapear. He goes to Dragon-Vale to find a mage to help him with his problem. And throughout his journeys he finds out some very intresting things. When he is asked a certain something, what will be his answer? No or Yes....


OH THAT SUCKS! IM A NEWBIE! IVE BEATEN EVERY GAME IN 1 - 3 DAYS! ah well

[Blazeon]

oh really, i hope you can put it on here, lookin forward too it!

[Nintendolover]

before u sell it can u make a new thread and write it there:TooHappy:

AND GOOD STORY!!!!

No, sorry, it's going 2 be was 2 long. It would take me days.

[Blazeon]

wel.....

how about right some of the best chapters on here?

No doubt i would say there all good.:TooHappy:

[Nintendolover]

I'll make a thread when I get the chance most likely tomorrow I'll type out chapters 1-3. Then if u want 2 read the rest u'll have 2 by the book. My family hasn't even read 1 word of it yet so, u guys are lucky. Just know that.

[PokemonQueen47]

Um....I have written numerous stories but I guess I could the first one that I typed on MS Word. But on MS Word its 20 pages long so....I'll just give you like the first 3 paragraphs or something....(well they are not exactly PARAGRAPHS more just like PAGES... :o )or else I will just give you the first page or so.(I am currently typing another story that is 21 pages long but it will be MUCH.MUCH longer then that!LOL it is not even anywhere NEAR the ending!LOL)
It is called Magic Is So Real


Prologue: Three curious friends explore a forest that they later learn is magical. Julie, Mary Brook, and Abraham, find themselves in a forest surrounded by strange creatures they have never seen before. When they come upon a huge, old house, that is so strange as the strange animals they saw they discover "Magic is so real".

Chapter 1 The Forest

"Come on, Mary Brook! Let’s go see where Abraham plans to take us exploring!" said Julie. "I’m coming, Julie! Just let me take my time looking for my journal so I can record our discoveries!" cried Mary Brook. Today was the day Abraham chose where the three friends explored. They would each take turns choosing places for them to go exploring. "I found it! Now lets hurry over Abraham’s house so he can take us exploring!" cried Mary Brook.

(Actaully that is just the FIRST chapter!LOL it has 13 Chapters all together.....)

[PokemonQueen47]

Um does anyone want the other chapters or what do you think of it? I have one other book thats book, or volume, two. They are:Magic is So Real(1.st one)and How To Use Magic(2.nd one). I got the second one into a book at school. Its actaully not bad I guess...

[PikaYasha]

do you know the freaky girl and old man in the old chateu?I know their story....very scary...but i think i'll type that later.
*starts singing the itsy bitsy spider for no apparent reason*
Now that i've cleared my head,what story do you want me to tell?

A.scary....Old chateu
B.sad....when my cat died....
C.Happy!When i got a new cat!
D.other

post what kind of story you want me to tell and i'll tell it!you could give me ideas for other and i'll try to make somethin out of it.

[PokemonQueen47]

:sad: *sigh* *huge sigh* I guess nobody likes my story. At least a friend in real life I know who I dedicated one of my books to liked it. But nobody on cheatmasters likes it or THEM...wait no...IT.*sigh again...much much bigger then the first huge sigh*

[PikaYasha]

*sniffle*o-okay...heres the story on when m-my cat died....
This happened a year ago...just to let ya know ;)

I was talking with my mom when she said that we'd have to put our cat Emily to sleep.i tried to persist her into saying 'i guess we'll keep her alive' but before i knew it,we were at the vets waiting until they said the procedure was over.it may've just takin a few minutes but it felt like forever......
when they finally said 'come in.it's over.'i hesitated a bit.'i don't want to see a lifeless cat...especially since its mine....'i thought.but finally i decided to go in.there was my lifeless cat.dead right in front of my eyes.on the table...right in front of me.i basically balled my eyes out looking at her from the door.the vet said that she wouldn't close her eyes,but she did.'i guess....she knew we were here....next to her....the whole time...*smile*'"she really was the best cat....."

i cut it short 'cause if i really wrote the whole thing,my hand would hurt!i have a new cat know.her name is pepper.she likes to play fetch..and well yeah...i think th8s may be my longest post.next time i'll tell the story of the old chateu! :D

See yous!

[PikaYasha]

:sad: *sigh* *huge sigh* I guess nobody likes my story. At least a friend in real life I know who I dedicated one of my books to liked it. But nobody on cheatmasters likes it or THEM...wait no...IT.*sigh again...much much bigger then the first huge sigh*
i liked your story.tweeke a few things and i bet a lot of other people will like it!

[PokemonQueen47]

Ok well then what about THIS story...I changed its name(first it was called Going To Hogwarts As A Muggle)...now its called Going To Hogwarts As Muggle-Born and this is its first chapter(I forgot to give it a chapter!LOL Well then the first chapter is called The Letter)
Once, on a not so wonderful weather day, an ordinary class sat in wait for their instructions from their teacher of what they would do that day. They chatted quietly while their teacher went to the Staff Room to check his mail in his mailbox. He came looking particularly confused. He looked down at a few letters that were surprisingly addressed to a few of his students. He looked at his class all becoming quiet when the teacher looked at them. He said "Class, I got a few letters in my mailbox addressed to only a few of you."

And for now that is all I can give because it has names of real people and I dont want to advertise some names for people to go find and....well yeah. You guys get it, dont you? I'll just tell you, the main characters in this story are: Lily(me),Trevor(one of my classmates in school) and Jena(one of my best friends ever). Its already 43 MS Word pages long. I expect for it to be a little longer though...LOL I am trying to get it to pages 50 or more but I think it will be more pages long!LOL Its not even in the middle of the story!LOL Its like at the....last begining almost middle.LOL Its pretty good to tell you the truth. My mom read it though when it was a little less pages but even then she thought it was good! :D

[PikaYasha]

it was nice!:D

[PokemonQueen47]

Thank you! At least SOMEONE says they like my story. Nobody else that I know of....no wiat NOBODY else in the whole world likes my story but you, my mom and my grandmother!LOL Thats so funny! Well....the person I deticated my book How To Use Magic, she liked it. And so did other people who saw my drawings:) My teacher told me I have a gift of art and my 3rd grade teacher ALWAYS tell's me I am such a good artist and she always loves to see my art. Im a gift of art and writing mixed up with sensitivity and emotions!LOL But really I practically am...LOL

[PikaYasha]

want to know the story of the old chateu now?

[grit]

you should put it on id like to read it

[Nintendolover]

Here's one for u. It's here on the forums.

http://forum.cheatmasters.com/showthread.php?t=1707