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PikaYasha
10-20-2007, 11:06 PM
This is one of the stories that I'm working on right now. Here's the first Chapter:
Chapter 1: The New Beginning
So...You want to know your Bio., am I right?...Okay....if you say so....Your name is Tomi, Okay?Good...it was just a random name.... Wait!HOLD IT!!!HOLD IT EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!!!Your name is Yellow....you got that?You have a Doduo named Dodosk,A Pikachu named ChuChu,a Raticate named Ratty,a Omanyte named Omask, a Graveler named Golosk,and a Caterpie named Freesk. These will all evolve in your later adventures, but right now I'm starting with the basics. You are from the Viridian Forest, and have a secret crush on Red. You know, the Pokemon league champion?Anyways.....later in your adventures you shall meet a new friend that will travel with you on your journeys. If you need anything, call me on my Poke'Gear #.....I'll give it to you...it's 7685340217394529462393619....You got that?Good!Then head out on your journey young trainer!
“Ngh.....*yawn*Don't....want to...wake up....”You said very sleepily.”Pika!PikaPi!Chu!”Your Pikachu named ChuChu woke you up. She sounded scared.”What now ChuChu?”Pika!Was your only answer, and you figured it out. The last thing you remembered was sleeping in Red's arms then everything blacked out.”Wait.....W-Where is everyone,ChuChu?”You asked,knowing that you would somehow get an answer. ChuChu only pointed to Red, Blue, and Green.
You ran up to them and asked them what happened.(Because you figured since you were asleep all this time, they would know)”I-I....I remember.....being turned into stone...and well...that's it....”Red replied.”What do you mean?”You asked with your voice full of wonder.”Eh...I can't remember the rest right now...let's go.”Green said, while flying back to his gym on his Pidgeot. Red just walked away. Finding a new destination to go to. While Blue, went to the nearest Pokemon Center. You were all alone now. No friends to talk to, no answers to your questions. Nothing. Your thoughts were disturbed by ChuChu pulling at your pant leg.
”Hey ChuChu. I haven't had much time to talk to you, have I?”You said to the smiling Pikachu face staring at you. You didn't get a reply, but you knew that ChuChu was happy, and so were you.
You had just left on your own destination, when you heard someone behind you. You turned around to see a little tiny Eevee running toward you. A person was running after it yelling for it to stop.”Get out of the way!My Eevee's been on a rampage lately!Get out of the way!”The person yelled, but it was to late. The Eevee tackled you and you fell backwards. While the Eevee lay on your chest, the person took out a PokeBall and returned the Eevee.”Ehe...sorry 'bout that....my Eevee's one ball of fun I tell ya. One GREAT big ball of fun.”She said while helping you get up.”Oh!Where are my manners....I'm Copper,you?”Copper asks.”I'm Yellow. Yellow of the Viridian forest.”You say happily. Knowing that there will be a great friendship ahead.
You two talked for awhile. Learning about each other, watching your Pokemon make friends with one another.
”So. Do you have a specific type of Pokemon you like?”Copper asks you,full of interest.”No. Not anything specific. All Pokemon are my favorite to be exact.”You answer.”Mostly the same here I guess. I mostly prefer fire types, but other types are nice to have handy too.”Copper answers, staring at the clouds. You stare at her in wonder. You never told each other about your past. Did something happen to her while she was young? There were so many things you wanted to ask, but you kept quiet because you didn't want to bring back bad memories.”Hello? Anyone in there?”Copper asked while waving her hand in front of your face.”Huh? Oh right....sorry about that..”You say sweat dropping.
Okay okay...I get it! You want to know Coppers Bio....so then..here it is!
Copper is a 12 year old female with six different Pokemon. She has a Eevee named Ever, a Charizard named Charcoal,a Arcanine named Flare, a Pikachu named Asha(and Asha can talk by the way...),a Absol named Arty, and a Typhlosion named Cinders. She has copper colored eyes(thus the name Copper) and black hair. All of her Pokemon have either a necklace or a bracelet that represents their title 'Pokemon team Universe', or so your told. Her starter Pokemon was a Charmander, but it evolved in to the Charizard you read about earlier. She is always ready for anything, Pokemon battle's to Rescue parties. If at anytime she fails, she always does her best the next time around. She's determined to beat Red and become the new Pokemon league champion, but she can't seem to find him....she now is a part of your growing team, but on the search of Red.
Pretty soon young Yellow, shall you meet a new friend on your journey! Strike hard, and do your best!
PikaYasha
10-21-2007, 12:12 AM
This is for grit:
Chapter 2: The Lone Traveler
While you and Copper were walking down what seemed to be a road, you heard a car honk up ahead.”That's funny.”Copper said softly, but you could still hear her.”I never knew that cars came over here.”You looked up at her in amazement.”Hey...What ARE cars?”You asked, still looking up at her.”Oh, yeah. Your from....from....””The Viridian Forest!”You interrupted.”Yes. The Viridian forest, huh? That means you don't know much about the outside world, am I right?”She said, while still gazing down on you.”I know about the outside world....I just don't know that much about IT.”You said replying”Wait...t-that wasn't a car...That was thunder!C'mon!We gotta get to a place safe quickly!”She said while grabbing your wrist and pulling you along.
When you finally found a place to sit for awhile, you both were watching the rain pour down outside. You sat there for awhile until you saw someone walking down the path that you just went down.”Hey Copper....”You whispered into her ear.”Look over there.”You said, while pointing to the strange figure.”Hn....”Was your only answer.
You both sat there for a long time, watching the figure make it's way closer to your hide-away. When the figure was about two yards away, you both decided to hide in a corner until it passed by. But the problem was that it didn't pass by your hiding place, it attacked it, causing both of you duck.”AIEE!!!!!!!!” You screamed when the attack almost hit both of you. Copper put your head down just in time though. You could tell already that the attack was supposed to be aimed at you, but missed. You could also tell the attack was a razor leaf. You both put your heads up and saw none other than Crystal. Or Crys for short.”Oh! Sorry you two. I thought you were team rocket members trying to pull a prank or somethin like that..”She said while sweat dropping. By this point, you all were soaked and decided to find a place to stay for the night together. It took you about an hour to find a place, but you got there.
When you all checked in Crystal and Yellow started sneezing.”*sigh*How come it's always me who doesn't get sick around here?”Copper said to you and Crys.”I guess...Achoo! That it's time for...Achoo! Bed....Achoo!”You said in between sneezes.”I guess so sicky.”Copper says sarcastically.
In the morning you all wake up and Crys says that she has to bid a farewell to you all. You say your good-byes then start heading East. After awhile of walking for so many miles, you stop for a quick rest. After about a mile or so, you meet up with a person named Drew.”*gasp*Drew-kun,what're you doing here?”Copper asks, and all of a sudden it hits you like a rock. They're BF and GF. Drew starts traveling with you and you seem to get to know much more about him then you did before.
Don't tell me.....Drew's Bio? Okay.....Drew is a 12 year-old male that has 5 Pokemon so far. They are Roselia,Absol,Flygon, Masqurain, and Spheal. Later he will catch more, but I'm with the basics people! Anyways, he will be traveling with you on your journeys, and that's it. Have fun and strike hard!
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PikaYasha
10-21-2007, 12:17 AM
Thanks.Here's Chapter 3:
Chapter 3: More Pokemon and New Adventures
You were on your way, talking and blabbering about, when the air started to smell like rotten eggs.”Hey Copper?”You ask a little quietly, but loud enough for her to hear you.”Uh...Yes Yellow?”She says looking down at you.”It's just that...the air...”You didn't need to say anymore, because right in mid sentence Copper said the rest for you.”..It smells am I right?”She says, kind of awkward smiling.”Yeah! How did you know?”You ask,a tiny bit intrigued.”Well, let's just say I smelled it about..Oh let's say five to six miles back.”She tells you. All you were was a gaped mouth eleven year old kid,looking up at a twelve year old that had just told you that she smelled a smell you smelled about an hour back.”H-How do you smell so well?!”You practically yell in her ear.”She got it from training with a Mightyena.”You swerve your head around and look at Drew, flipping his green hair away from his face.(You forgot about him, didn't you?)”Why did you train with a Mightyena in the first place, Copper?”You ask, VERY intrigued this time.”Well...That's a toughy there Yellow.....I guess you could say...I wanted to become a wolf. A-At the time though.”She says, stuttering at the last part.”Oh....I get it now.”You say, still confused, but holding it back.
Later on in the day, day turned to sunset, then nighttime. You all had to set up camp-Luckily Copper always carries an extra sleeping bag.-and sleep out in the woods. It was very peaceful in the woods. By the time you thought everyone else was asleep, you were still looking up at the stars.'The stars are beautiful in here. They're so...BRIGHT.'You thought. You fell asleep after about an hour so after gazing at he stars so long your neck got a cramp.
In the morning, you were the last to wake up. Drew kept poking you with a stick, or so you heard. You were woken up by the BANG of the fist of Copper landing on Drew's head. When you all had finished breakfast, you all went towards a town that you heard from Copper was called “Fanhura Town”. On the way there, you ran into a few Pokemon trainers, challenging Copper to all sorts of battles. Of course, knowing her, she won every single one of them.
You ran into a few Pokemon too, but Copper said that only Pokemon that contribute bonds with you are the ones you should catch. Drew thought the exact opposite. They got into a fight that lasted a half hour or so, then you got bored and finally broke the two up. When the fighting ceased, they started a Pokemon battle between only them, the two, and all you did was play with ChuChu and all your other Pokemon.
When the battle was over, the victor was none other then Copper herself.”You sure have improved since the last time we battled, Copper. Last time I won though...”Drew said basically into her face. At that exact moment, Copper screamed directly at his face:”YOU SO DID NOT!!!!!I WON IF YOU CAN'T REMEMBER, KNOWING THAT PUNY BRAIN OF YOURS,YOU PROBABLY FORGOT THE WHOLE THING!!!!”Then they started fighting again. You were just looking at them thinking,'They really ARE the perfect couple....'
The fight lasted an hour on the dot. They were even fighting on the road to Fanhura Town. When you got to the sign that said “Welcome to Fanhura Town”, you looked around and saw not a town, but a city. Right when you thought of it, a man with two Machokes carrying a ladder, plaster, and paint walked over to the sign, and changed the name to “Fanhura City”.”Hey guys! You see that? Now it's called Fanhura city!”At the moment you said “city”, they both jerked their heads around and pulled you to the nearest bush.”Shh!!!Try to be quiet Yellow! Who knows what happened, but all I can smell in this crummy town is the scent of Team Rocket.”Copper said, and you could tell that a deep growl was forming in her throat. You couldn't hear it, but you could just tell by the look on her face.
Copper gave you two a plan that she said should work, and then you went to your post. Your job was to stay in any bush that was close to any two Team Rocket members and do a little eavesdropping. Your first target came right away, near the bush you were already in. Then another came and there you started your eavesdropping technique. All you got was:”We're gonna rule the world tomorrow, or never.” You went to find Drew, who was the official “Keep Everyone Protected” person. Including you by a lot, since this was your first time doing this kind of stuff. You told Drew, and Drew just did his fancy-shancy nod and went back to looking out for Copper with his binoculars. Copper was doing the most dangerous thing of all, trying to sneak into the Team Rocket Head-Quarters.
This was the end of chapter three. Will Copper be able to stop Team Rocket? Will she be able to even come out alive? Find out in chapter number four.
story awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PikaYasha
10-21-2007, 12:27 AM
Thanks again, and here's the next chapter:
Chapter 4:Team Rocket,Be Gone!
Note:I will be introducing different Point of Views in this chapter. That is the P.O.V. Part.
'Come on Copper....I know you can do it!'You yelled in your head. SCREECH.....Was all you heard, and in she went. You didn't know what happened inside, because you were outside.
COPPERS P.O.V.
I headed into the Team Rocket H.Q. Without making a single sound. I know and hope no one at all heard me. I headed towards a group of Team Rocket members and eavesdropped them. Stupid fools. To dumb to sense any other presence near the area. I found out that they were planning to inhabit all Pokemon with no freedom, helping themselves to any in which they wanted.
When I learned all of this, I headed toward a big door that said:”Planning and Presidents Room” on the door. I opened it very slowly, and then a little bit faster thinking of what could happen if I was caught on the inside of the room, or out. Luckily for me, there wasn't a soul in sight. I went directly over to a few blackish looking balls that had a red “R” on the front. I opened one, and it was empty. They were probably going to use them for catching every single Pokemon they wanted. I also figured they were called “Rocket Balls”.
I found the president and beat him in a Pokemon battle. Then just barely by a physical one. When the Team Rocket members saw their leader on the ground, they picked him up and fled someplace that probably no one else knows of but them.
BACK TO YOU
Copper came out of the Team Rocket H.Q. Very slowly, but it was as quick as she could go. Seeing all the scrapes on her, you figured something good and yet bad happened inside. You and Drew ran over to her and set her down. Right when you set her down, she was out like a light. Sleeping away. You knew that she deserved and needed it though. For it was she who had the courage to do that very heroic thing.
Copper was still resting after about three hours, and you and Drew took her to the nearest Pokemon Center in Fanhura. The nurse there told you two that it was good you brought her in when you did, or she'd be just barely alive by now. You waited the whole night out waiting for her to be awake. When you woke up,she woke up just a few minutes after.”Copper! Are you Okay?! Are you going to be fine?!?!?”You ask shouting near Drew's ear causing him to jump out of his slumber.”Wha-What? Regice get out of my way!!Huh?”Drew says as he looks at you and Copper very stunned.”Y-You didn't just hear that did you?”He asks. You and Copper both nod and sweat drop at the same time.
You three are on your way to the next town and ready to go when all of a sudden a kid runs up to you and says:”Here! Just take it! Free of charge! Thank You!”He says while shoving a blanket into your hands, and runs away. You stand there in a very deep shock. This all happened so quickly and you didn't really catch on.”Hey Yellow....What is it, that thing the boy gave to you?” Copper says, and snaps you right back to reality. “I uh...really don't know.”You say.
Copper tells you you should open the little blanket that's in your hands. You do just as she says and in the small green blanket is a small orange bundle of fur.”Pikachu!”It says.”Is this really a Pikachu Copper?”You ask.”It looks like a shiny one if I am correct.”She says looking at it from all directions.”That's a shiny alright. Those things sure are rare. I bet the boy gave it to you because Team Rocket was trying to steal it.””But what do I do with it is my first question.”You say to them both.”I say you give it a lot of love and have it on your team. If someone tries to take him, then I'll be there on the scene of the crime.”She says while winking at you.
You decide that you shouldn't leave the poor thing stranded and out for the creepy Team Rocket to catch, so now you have a new recruiter to your team.
Yes, this is the end of chapter 4. Pretty suspenseful wasn't it? Anyways, you will land into another city in the next chapter. So good luck!
PikaYasha
10-21-2007, 01:41 AM
Thanks....heres the next part:
Chapter 5:The Flower Factor
You all headed into a big city called Harlem City.”This is so...BIG!!!”You say looking at all the big buildings towering over you.”Hey! Look at that!” Someone shouted form behind you.”What is it,old man?”You ask him as politely as possible.”You mean you didn't see it? It was a human...With dog ears!”He says. You are thinking,'What? A person with dog ears?' ”Oh...No...” Is all you hear slip from Drew's mouth. Now your minds moving!'Is he talking about Copper?'You hear a bush rustle from behind you. You see a Dog-Eared Copper poking her head out from the bush.”Crummy Town. That's what it should be called.”Is all you hear her say.”You say what. Copper?”You ask.”Hn. I hate flowers.”Is your only response.”She gets like this when there are flowers around.”Drew says as you look at him in wonder.
You three have to leave Harlem City fats because the people there thought Copper was a demon from the netherworlds. It was goo to because after ten minutes of walking she turned back to normal.”Hey Copper.....Why and how do you change when you're around flowers?”You ask.”Lets just say I got it from the Mightyena training. That answer your question?”She replies looking up at the sky the whole time.”Yeah.”You quickly answer.
The next town you got to(Finally! A town!)Chikara Town. No one had a clue to why it was named that at ALL. You were passing through the town, each of you going your own separate ways through it, and a Ice Beam attack missed you by an inch.”Woah!”You yelled as you jumped back a bit. Copper and Drew came running to the sound of your yelp.”Hahaha....I see you have a few new members Yellow.”You look up and see...Giovanni? I thought he was dead?”Giovanni! I thought you were dead?!”You yelled up at his enormous blimp.”I was. Until someone resurrected me.”He say with a wide scowl on his face.”It felt nice being back. But now I have to follow you through these crummy towns and all that other stuff the author is making me do.”(HEY!!!)
“Hey Yellow, do you really know this guy?”Copper asks, gasping for air.(She was running okay?)”Yeah. He was enslaving a wild and innocent Deoxys, so we had to kill him.”You replied, remembering the horrible memories that you have of that day. You hear a very deep growl coming from Copper. You look at her and see her eyes going blood red and claws growing instead of fingernails. You also see a few fangs forming.”You say he enslaved the poor Pokemon, huh? Then I'll take care of him for you....*snicker*...”Thats the voice of Copper from this demon like thing thats forming in front of your own eyes.
PikaYasha
10-21-2007, 02:17 AM
Thanks.I'm still working on the next Chapter.I'm gonna have so much fun with it!!:):):):)
i couldnt do a story like that if i could the world would destroy itself
PikaYasha
10-21-2007, 02:35 PM
Thanks.I've been thinking of the next chapter and how to start it, but I think I'm doing well.
i bet its going to be good
PapaLuLu27
01-02-2008, 10:46 PM
PikaYasha? You got the Trainer, Pokemon and names of the Pokemon Manga Yellow series didn't you?
PapaLuLu27
01-02-2008, 11:12 PM
Whoops sorry, i guess i should read before i post, i thought you were rewritingYellow:p
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