naruto Based Story

[jacksparrow]

ok so i'm creating a story based off of Naruto. i just want a general opinion on it, so if you could give me one that would be great. her's the first page.

Chapter One

“ You were born with a demon inside you, you wretched child!” “ Go away you wretch!” that’s all Naruka Uzumaki could remember as he sat at the Ninja Academy waiting to pass the test for Genin. His father the 6th Hokage, Naruto Uzumaki was off on important business. His mother Sakura Haruno was tending to some patients in the hospital. He was distracted this day for he was thinking of his heritage. His father had been born with the Nine-tailed fox Demon sealed inside him by the Fourth Hokage. His mother was a beautiful woman, although she had thought Naruto annoying in their early years, had fallen for his father when they were in their early twenties.

“ Naruka, Naruaka?” Someone was calling his name, but whom? Then it hit him Iruka Sensei was calling him for his exam. “ Coming,” called Naruaka. Naruaka stepped into the room and immediately his heart sunk, but at the same moment jumped for joy. His parents were there staring at him with joy in their eyes.

“ Mother, Father what are you doing here,” asked Naruka nervously. His heart was pounding. He had to perform in front of his father who was really powerful and a genius and his mother who was a medical ninja and a gen jutsu genius. His heart raced faster, what if he messed up, not only would he mess up in front of the judges and be held back, but he would mess up in front of his parents and he knew his father would be deeply disappointed.

“ Ok, Naruaka will you please perform the cloning jutsu,” Iruka said semi-calmly as though he would get into trouble if Naruaka didn’t pass. He was probably tense that the sixth Hokage was here and that the sixth Hokage was his favorite student of all time that he respected.

[PikaYasha]

I love it!:)Can you write more Chappys?I love your story.
It is full of....AWESOMENESS!!!!:):):)

[jacksparrow]

thanks i have about 6 pages. if you want me to i'll post them as i go along, i guess.

[PikaYasha]

Really?Thanks.:)It's so good....hehe...I think I can figure out what happens next,seeing as I always do that.

[jacksparrow]

ok here's the nexxt part of it:

Iruka had great respect for Naruto, ever since he was a ninja in training. Iruka had hated the demon fox within Naruto, but even he said, “he could never hate the boy, he had the greatest respect for the boy, a citizen of Konoha village.” Even now that friendship had never ceased and Naruto still went to Iruka for advice.
Naruaka was back on track. He raised his hands, index and middle fingers pressed together, one horizontally and one vertically. While all the other fingers lay curled. He summoned his own chakra, and a blue orb of visible chakra swirled around him. His mother and father watched with extreme calmness as he performed the cloning jutsu. His father was especially interested for this was a jutsu that took him a few weeks to master and was his worst one, until he stole the forbidden scroll and ran into the forest. That was an extremely frightful night for him. He had killed a teacher while protecting Iruka. That was when he found the first person that really, truly cared about him, other than the Third Hokage.
Finally the jutsu was done. With a small poof the clone was right there in the room standing adjacent to Naruaka. The clone was perfect in every way, shape, and form, but Naruka didn’t just create a clone it was a shadow clone made from real flesh and blood. Chakra perfectly divided into the clone. He had done the hand signal wrong and he realized it right away. His heart dropped. He had messed up; he was going to be held back while all the others will have graduated. He thought of Sakanita Uchiha. The girl he loved although she loved Sako Nara. He also thought of his friend Lee Uchiha. He would never see them again.
“Oh my, th-this is amazing,” Iruka stammered, “ a perfect shadow clone. Naruto what do you make of this, is this not the most incredible thing you have ever witnessed in a young child. Not to pick favorites, but he takes after you no doubt.”
“Yes it is amazing,” Naruto said calmly. I can’t imagine, my son got my talent for nin-jutsu. Of course he must have gotten some of his mother’s gen-jutsu abilities no doubt. I think he will make a fine Hokage in my place some day, yes, yes.

[PikaYasha]

Awesome.Came out as I suspected!:D'(Cha right,idiot)(Shut up,Kichiro!!!)

[jacksparrow]

alright her's the next part i'm actually going to give you more:

Amazing I can barely contain my excitement, but I must to show my place in the world. I can always make a fuss at home, yes, that would be the best place for excitement. Hmmmmm…
“Well I can only say this about you young man,” Iruka said calming himself down. This is it, thought Naruka to himself, “I’m going to fail, he’s going to come right out and say it I will never see my friends again, or Sakanita.” Sakanita, the name rang through his head over and over.
“ You______ ”Oh no thought Naruka again here it comes. “Pass,” Iruka said.
“ NNNNNNNOOOOOOOO, I fail_ huh, I passed,” said a confused Naruka.
“ That’s right, you pass,” Iruka said again.
“ Wait I don’t understand,” said Naruka,” how did I pass I did the hand sign completely wrong, and it wasn’t a basic clone, it was a shadow clone, I shouldn’t have passed.”
“ Uuuuuhhhh, it looks like I have a lot of explaining to do here,” moaned Iruka, “ well, you see”
“ Allow me Iruka,” said Sakura finally coming into the conversation, “ you see Naruka, when a ninja possess the ability to make a shadow clone at a young age, like yourself and your father, that ninja will proceed to a genin depending on how well he created his shadow clone. Since the shadow clone is such a high rank jutsu, you will be graded on how accurately your shadow clone is. If you prove to be successful in almost every way possible, that means you have divided you chakra evenly and it has a resemblance to you self, you will most likely proceed in your rank. Is this starting to make sense sweetie?”
“Yes mother,” said Naruka, “I think I got it now, and don’t call me sweetie, it’s such a sissy term!”
“That’s good, I’m glad you could help me out Mrs. Uzimaki,” sighed Iruka.
“ Iruka,” snapped Sakura, “ how many times have I told you not to call me Mrs. Uzumaki, it’s ok to call me Sakura.
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“ Come on Naruka, let’s go home,” said Sakura.
“Ok, mom,” replied Naruka. They turned to leave and went out the door. Iruka stood silently pondering his thoughts. Naruka, a truly amazing child. I should give him a treat, it wouldn’t be fair, and I took Naruto out for ramen. What should I… I have it! That’s exactly what I’ll do! He turned and ran after Naruka, Naruto, and Sakura.
“Naruaka, wait up, Naruka stop,” called Iruka after them. Naruka and his parents stopped and turned around. Iruka caught up to them shortly and apparently out of breath. “ Naruka, I’m not supposed to give this to you yet, but if it’s all right with your parents, I will.” He looked at Naruto, and then at Sakura, they both looked at each other and nodded. Iruka nodded back and took a step forward to Naruaka. “ Naruka, come forward and close your eyes, please.”
Naruaka looked sternly at Iruka. Naruka looked good and hard at Iruka for a few moments, wondering what Iruka could possibly want. He then took a few steps, placing himself in front of Iruka, took one last look at Iruka’s calm, friendly face, and closed his eyes. He heard rustling and then he felt something being put on his head and tied around the back. He kept his eyes closed, but his mind open. He was thinking to himself, what is this on my head? It feels soft and warm, but stiff in the middle. Maybe it’s… no it couldn’t be, could it?
“ Ok Naruka, open you eyes,” Iruka said. Naruka opened his eyes. “ Congratulations, you’re a ninja, and you deserve a hatai-ate, a head band of the Leaf Village of Konoha. Good job.” He stuck out his thumb for a thumb up.
“Why-how,” Naruka stammered, “ why now?”
“ Well I just thought I should, you’re a special boy Naruka. Remember that, always. Don’t let anybody tell you other wise,” Iruka declared proudly.
“ I, thank you Iruka Sensei,” Naruka said, his eyes starting to tear. He noticed his vision starting to blur, he wiped the tears from his eyes and adjusted his headband, just as his father had done many years before. He moved it up and down

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in a way that made the forehead, bearing the insignia of the leaf village, a small spiral beginning from a line at the top swirling to a stop in the middle of the spiral and a triangle on the bottom left hand corner, make a small clink noise. Then a smile came upon his face, and he laughed.

[PikaYasha]

Again,wonderful.:)
For once she actually says something that I can understand...BE quiet.I don't want to hear that anymore....KICHIRO....I know you have a crush on Shihara....I KNOW....FINE....I'll be quiet....

[jacksparrow]

what? what are you saying?

[jacksparrow]

ok next verse:

“ All right I’m ready to go,” announced Naruka.
“ Wait, there is one more surprise,” said Iruka.
“One, more?”
That’s right, we’re going out for RAMEN!”
Ra-ram-ramen?”
“What you don’t like ramen?” Naruka put his head down, and started to quiver. “ Naruka are you ok?” Naruka put his hands in fists near his head and then jumped up and down.
“ RAMEN, RAMEN, RAMEN, RAMEN, RAMEN, I LOVE RAMEN!”
Iruka smiled slightly. “ Ok, ok, settle down, um we still have to get your paren…”
“ No you don’t, your welcome to take him,” Naruto and Sakura said at once.
“ Great let’s go,” exclaimed an exited Naruka. He grabbed Iruka’s hand and pulled him out the door.
“ I’ll bring him back around 7,” Iruka called back to Naruto and Sakura.
“ Take your time, there’s no hurry,” Sakura called back. Naruka and Iruka were already half way down the stairs. “ Let’s go back to the house and have a little us time,” Naruto said to Sakura.
“ I’ll race you,” Sakura said.
“ You’re on,” replied Naruto with a grin on his face.
“ What are you smirking at,” Sakura asked, “ you don’t think I can beat you?”
“ No it’s not that,” Naruto said.
“ I can see that, that’s exactly what you meant.”
“ No it’s not that it’s…”
“ You know what I’ll prove to you I can beat you, loser has to do the dishes, deal”
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“ Oh you’re on, ready set go!” they dashed down the stairs and to their home. Sakura was in the lead and Naruto was gaining on her. They raced on and on; every so often people would jump out of their way just to avoid being hit.
Sakura eventually crashed into a man selling melons. Naruto was in them lead now. He looked back to see if Sakura was on his tail, when he saw his wife on the ground with some strange man holding her hand. His face boiled. How dare he grab his wife’s hand. He raced back and stared menacingly at the man. He let go and backed away in fear. Sakura fell back down and made a small noise indicating that she had hurt herself. Naruto grabbed her arm and helped her up. Sakura grabbed Naruto’s hand and asked to talk to him in private.
”Naruto he was only helping me up. I crashed into his cart and fell down. He was just apologizing, he wasn’t trying to ask me anything strange. You take things too seriously when it comes to family. Chill out for a while.”
“ Oh, I guess…I made a… mistake. Oops.” Well I… Hey, Cheater!” Sakura was racing down the street before Naruto even realized what she had done. She was already half way home. Naruto took off after he calling “sorry” to the man. He was gaining on he when she disappeared. He kept on sprinting at top speed. He was almost there. Just a little more, Almost there, almost, huh? He opened the door and Sakura was sitting on the couch filing her nails.
“ I thought you got lost or maybe you just gave up. I’ve been sitting here for nearly 5 minutes. I guess you’re doing the dishes tonight.” She had a snooty look on her face. She was smirking with one eyebrow raised. She spoke almost sarcastically.
“Oohhhhhhh MMMMAAAAAAANNNNNNNN,” Naruto moaned, “ I can’t believe I lost. How could the 6th hokage possibly lost to a girl? I can absolutely no believe this.”
“ You do remember that the 5th hokage was a girl, don’t you. And girls can’t beat guys in somethings, I mean we can’t beat you boys in everything but we can still do most of the things boys can do and some that you can’t. so I don’t think

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you’re judging fairly, NOW GET TO THOOSE DISHES AND MAKE THEM SPOTLESS!”

[PikaYasha]

Awesome again.:)
Hi.I wanted to say they're good too.:)
Thats a good kitty.:)

[jacksparrow]

I still don't get it, but i''l get the next part:

“ Fine, I’ll do it, but I won’t like it,” mumbled Naruto.


At the Ramen shop Naruka and Iruka were chatting joyfully. They were laughing and even started a conversation with the cook.
“ So Naruka you’ll be getting your assigned team tomorrow. Are you excited? I can assure you you’ll do great, maybe even turn out like your father.”
“ Iruka Sensei, you’re not going to put me in with Sasuta, are you? I hate him, he thinks he is so great and all the girls go gaga over him. I can’t stand him!”
“ Uh__________, well it… didn’t even cross my mind, and more importantly it’s not even my decision whose group it is, it’s your father’s. So I have no power in this say.’
“ That’s not fair, anyway I know daddy wouldn’t put me in with that jerk. He couldn’t stand Sasuke so why should I have to stand Sasuta? Anyway I really want to be in a group with Sakanita. I… I… I have a crush on her and I really want her to know that, but Sasuta can’t know, he’’l hate me more if he knew I had a crush on his sister.”

and tha's all i have so far, i'll keep on it stay tuned.:laugh::TooHappy:

[PikaYasha]

I will!Because its such an awesome story!:)

[jacksparrow]

alright i have a little more.here it is:

Iruka slurped the rest of the ramen in his mouth and choked. Naruka slapped him on the back, and it all spilled out of Iruka’s mouth. He grabbed his napkin and wiped his mouth.
“ Iruka Sensei are you ok, what was that all about?”
“ I’m just fine, I guess it went down the wrong pipe when I swallowed it and the rest followed.”
“ Oh, that makes sense.”
“ Well anyway, I thin it’s time I got home, I’ll see you tomorrow Iruka Sensei.” Naruka got up and left as quikly as possible.
“ Oh and Naruka…eh, Naruka where did you…”
“ Hey, when you’re finished here’s the bill,” said the cook. He then mumbled, “kid eats like there’s no tomorrow.”
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Iruka looked at the bill and his eyes went wide.

25 bowls of pork noodle ramen: $100.00
1 bowl of pork ramen: $4.00
2 bowls of miso ramen: $10.00
3 bowls of shoyu ramen: $15.00
6 bowls of shio ramen: $30.00
4 bowls of tonkotsu ramen: $20.00
TOTAL: $ 179.00
“ OMG, h…ho..how did this happen, how could one, little, twelve year-old boy eat this much. I only had one bowl.”
“ Well, you got the money or not,” asked the cook.
“ Um, let me see.” Iruka opened his wallet, His heart dropped. It was empty.
“ Uh________, well I…I um, heh.”
“ You don’t have any money do you? Well in that case you’ll have to work off the money you owe us, into the kitchen with you.”

[PikaYasha]

lol....poor Iruka-sensei.:)

[PrinceOfJohn]

lol. and that's not tonkotsu in japanese the people said tonkatsu:laugh:

[jacksparrow]

it doesn't really matter does it? any way i'll add more soon.

[PikaYasha]

Fine with me.As long as it keeps getting added to.It's a really good story.Mine is horrible.........at least yours is better than mine.........

[jacksparrow]

thanks. but i don't think your's is horrible.

[jacksparrow]

o i have more:
He threw Iruka into the kitchen and shoved an apron over his head and put him to work, cleaning the dishes, sweeping the floor, cooking, and washing the counter. It was the end of the day when Iruka finally almost finished. He was just cleaning the dishes when the cook and his assistant came in and got their coats.
“Ok now when you’re done don’t forget to lock up. I don’t want anyone breaking in here and stealing my recipes or my money, is that understood? Also when you’re done you are to count the profit for today, and lock up the drawer.”
“Yes, sir, I understand. I promise I’ll lock up.”
“Good, and make sure the door is nice and tight,” the cook said putting on his jacket then throwing Iruka the keys. He left afterwards mumbling to himself and putting his arm around his assistant who was his daughter.
Iruka finished cleaning the dishes a short while afterwards. He then gave the shop one last sprucing up and went into the back room to balance today’s profits. He was just putting the money in the drawer when he heard a clank

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of bottles, robbers, he thought. He locked the money in the drawer and made his way to the wall where he edged his way to the doorway. When he got there he peered over the doorframe into the darkness. He couldn’t see a thing; it was too dark in the kitchen. He looked around the room and finally he saw a dark figure groping along the counter in the room looking for money. Iruka’s heartbeat went faster, he stepped away from the wall and made his way into the kitchen. He groped around for the light switch with one hand while his other went for a kunai in his pouch. He did it all at once; he turned the light switch on and pounced on the robber, put the kunai to his neck. He then realized it wasn’t a robber, but a hungry thief, and it wasn’t a man it was merely a kid, about the age of nine. He got up and helped the frightened little boy up. Then he was surprised attacked by another boy. This one was about eight and had no idea what he was doing. He grabbed the child under his arms and put him on the floor. They both looked at him frightened.
“ Now what is this all about, who are you both, and why are you out here all alone, more importantly where are your parents,” asked Iruka.
The nine-year old boy answered first. “I’m Taiku and this is my little brother Yash. We’re orphans and we’re hungry, and more importantly we’re trying to rob you so hands up in the air, you old fool.” He took out a stick and ran at Iruka with it in the air. Iruka put his fingers out and the Taiku stopped. Iruka poked him in the head.
“ Listen if you wanted food you could have just asked me, and for robbing me you’ll never intimidate me if you hesitate too much, and your stance was weak I could have easily pushed you down. You want to cover your body so there is no way to harm you, as for food here.” He took two pieces of bread of the counter and gave it to each of the boys. Iruka smiled at them while they looked confused at his face. “ I know what it’s like to be an orphan. My parents were killed when I was about nine myself. I had to make a fool out of

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my self in school just because I wanted attention, that was never easy. I was hurt bad, I was all alone, but I got through it, don’t try to steal, make the best of your life. The hokage was even parentless, he was just as bad as I was, but everyone hated him, no one showed him any love, until he met me. He then changed. So watch out for you and your brother, and do the best you can. Ok” He gave another smile at each of them.
Taiku smiled at his brother and his brother smiled at him. “ Thank you, sir I’m sorry we tried to rob you. That speech meant a lot to us, and we’ll do better than robbin. Maybe if we’re lucky we’ll find a family some day, but for now, we’ll see you later, we have to get to our box and go to bed. See ya mister,” and they ran off.

[jacksparrow]

ok here's more:

“Poor kids, I wish I could do more to help them,” Iruka mumbled to himself. Too many children are going up without parents these days. Someone’s has to do something about it. I think I should consult Naruto about this matter. He’ll do something about it; I know he will, he too grew up without parents. Just look at him now, 6th hokage, married to his crush he had while they were genin. Amazing how he turned out…Iruka took the keys out of his pocket and climbed over the counter, pulled down the gate, and locked it. Then he put the keys in a safe place, under the carpeting that was under the chairs, and walked on home.
While he was walking he noticed how many young children were sitting on the cold ground shivering. It was a cold night and it was sad to see them suffer, the war between the Sand, Sound and Leaf Villages had left so many children parentless. Again he thought of himself and Naruto, both orphans from the Kyuubi, the fox demon. The fox had killed Naruto’s mother and his father had died as well, sealing the fox inside his son had proven too much for him, he had died. Iruka was similar, his mother and father had died fighting the fox, and he had been devastated and looked at being the class clown as a sign of attention. Naruto had never known his parents and

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he too had become not only the class clown, but the village fool as well. Being the class clown seemed the only way for people to know of Iruka and Naruto. It seemed the only way to get attention. It wasn’t easy being an orphan for so many years. You had to live alone, eat alone, and just be alone. It wasn’t fun either, it was lonely, and there was nobody there to comfort you when you got hurt or were just plain sad.
Iruka was in the middle of that thought when he felt a small tug at the back of his shirt. He turned around and there was a small girl, about four years old holding her hands together signaling she was asking for food. Iruka smiled. He had snuck four more pieces of bread. He took one out of his pocket and ripped a small piece off for the girl. The girl smiled at him and he smiled back. “ I know it’s not much, but it’s the least I could do,” he told the girl.
“ Thank you kind sir, thank you,” she replied happily. She then started to cough. Iruka came to her side and made sure she was ok. She stopped coughing after a while. She had been out in the cold winter, wearing only a dress for two months. She had caught a cold and if she were not treated she would die. Iruka picked her up and carried her to the hospital, where they checked her and put her in a warm room. “ Thank you,” she said in her last words. She died shortly afterwards. Iruka looked at her and couldn’t help but think that other children would need the same medical treatment or they too would die shortly. He had to go to Naruto, it was now or never, he had to do something soon or all these children would die. He walked out into village streets and made his way to Naruto’s house to talk about this serious problem. He finally got to Naruto’s house after the cold, long walk from the hospital. He knocked on the door and heard a woman call “Just a minute, I’ll be right there.” There were a few minutes of fumbling and noises, but finally woman opened the door and welcomed him in. Iruka had never been to Naruto’s house before and he did not even know the woman who greeted him.

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She was rotund, wearing a green housekeeping outfit and she had rosy cheeks. Iruka was rushed off into the halls and brought into a large hallway with giant stairs and fancy rugs and a chandelier. Then he entered another hallway with paintings of the previous hokages and family members of Sakura. He then entered a fine dining hall where Naruto, Sakura, Naruka, and a man and lady sat having dinner. Naruka was just sitting there having all ready had his dinner. Naruto glanced across the table over his wine glass at Iruka who was looking rather unsure of what to make all of all of this.
“Iruka what are you doing here, I would have thought you’d be home by now.”
“Um…Naruto can I talk to you in private somewhere. It’s very important.” Naruto looked at his wife for permission to leave, Sakura nodded her head. He got up and walked to Iruka and put his arm around him. They stepped into the hall and walked into a small study near by.
“Now what is it that you wish to tell me?”
“Well Naruo you know what it is like to be an orphan. There are many children out on the streets living in boxes and getting sick. I just took a small girl to the hospital and she died in an instant. I wish to know if you can do something about this maybe have all the children moved to a vacant building and hire someone to care for them, preferably someone from the hospital who know what to do if they are to become sick.”
“ Well, I had no idea of this, yes of course I’ll help. I think what you suggested is the perfect solution. I will go to it at once. In fact I will go out looking for a building this night, I will of course have to tell Sakura about this and she will have to explain to her parents, but I think it can be arranged.”

[PikaYasha]

Wonderful storyboard.Just absolutely wonderful.I love it a lot.:)I hope you keep writing the chapters.
And thanks for the comment.

[jacksparrow]

your welcome. here's more...

“ That’s great, but does this village have any vacant buildings?”
“I’m sure we can find that out. I happen to know a guy who’s perfect for that job. He’s been all over this village and he knows it inside and out, it is my good friend…”
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“don’t say Konahamaru, don’t say Kono…”
“ Konahahamaru.”
“Uuuuuuuuggggggghhhhhhh.”
“Ok let’s get to it, I know exactly where I’ll find him…”
“Don’t say the old forest, don’t say the old…”
“The old forest is where he’ll be.”
“Uuuuuuuuuuughhhhhhhhh.”
“Well I’ll go back to the dining hall, and Iruka you can go and get ready for school tomorrow.” Iruka turned to leave. “ Oh and Iruka…”
“Hmm.”
“ You should really get your voice looked at, you sound horrible.” Iruka’s mouth dropped and his eyes widened. Naruto walked right past him. Naruto then locked his hands together and put them behind his head, and walked on proudly. Iruka was left in that pose twitching. He stood there for about three minutes and then straightened himself and left for his house.
Naruto walked back to the dining hall slightly discourage that nobody bothered to tell him about the children on the street. Or maybe it was that nobody cared or was as disturbed by them dying in the streets. When he got to the dining hall he slipped in quietly a concerned look on his face. Sakura noticed this immediately. She rushed to him and asked what was wrong. They talked in hushed voices for a few minutes, and then Sakura Hugged him wishing him good luck. He then turned and left.

[jacksparrow]

alright here's more:

Naruto went out the door and walked down the road. He stopped as a thought crossed his mind. He stared up at the sky. What would the Third Hokage, Sarutobi, think of all this. Children in the streets, some dying, it just wasn’t right. I have to make this problem go away. He hurried on and finally he came to the forest where he was sure Konohamaru would be. He took one look at it and took another thought about this. Strange things have happened in this forest. Some of his best ninja went missing in here. He thought again, he had to do it, for the children. He gulped and took one step forward, if he did
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not come back, who would take his place as hokage? Perhaps Sakura would step up. That would probably be best. He entered the forest cautiously. A fine mist started to form around his ankles. He felt something tugging at his mind, tearing him away from his body. He felt dizzy, disoriented and sleepy. The next thing he remembered was he was on the ground and he felt himself being wrapped up, like a snake coiling around him. Then the rest was a blur except a man coming and hacking at something, and then he felt himself being lifted and carried off.

[PikaYasha]

OH!!!AWESOME AGAIN!!!Go go, jacksparrow-kun!!!

[jacksparrow]

thanks i'm still adding more as i speak. i'll get it soon. stay tuned for another exciting episode of Nauruka.AKA the title of my story.

[PikaYasha]

Awesome title..I guess mine will still stay as the original name,Naruto.Why?Because I'm to lazy to think of another one.You might as well call me the female version of Shikamaru.

[jacksparrow]

alright i have a little more:

He had a strange dream that he was carried to some camp and put in a tent. He was then cared for on his wounds, he had gotten when the thing that grabbed him cut into his skin and his face had gotten a serious cut. Then he woke up, he looked around the dark space that was over him. Where were the stars, and why did he feel like he was lying in a tent and covered in blankets. He then realized he was lying in an enclosed space covered in blankets.
Someone then came in and peered in the tent. Then realized Naruto was awake and came closer. Naruto stared and got scared when the strange man came closer. The man came to his side and was fumbling with something. It suddenly was light in the tent. Naruto squinted and immediately recognized the figure as Konohamaru. He sighed in relief and then it hit him. He was looking for Konohamaru to tell him about the plan.
“Konohamaru I need to ask you something...I need to…”
“Shhhhhhhh, you need to take it easy, you’ve been hurt and a few broken bones from that vine that got hold of you…wait how do you know my name?”
“I…what you don’t remember me. Konohamaru it’s me Naruto. Remember we’ve been friends for years.”
“No…no way is it really you…NARUTO it is you. How you been? I thought I’d never see you again after the war with the sand. So what’s new?”
“Well I’m the Hokage now and…”

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“Wait you’re the hokage. I don’t believe it…Oh yeah you said something about wanting to ask me something.”
“Yeah, do you know if the Leaf village has any vacant houses?”
“Yeah there’s one down by the hospital. It’s on the facing the hospital on the right side. Why do you need to know?”
“Well, Iruka was walking home and he noticed children living on the street, parentless from the war. Their parents died from fighting the sand and many mothers died from protecting their children. Some of the children died and some got away from the sand ninja. Fathers died protecting mother and child. After the war was over there were a lot of children crawling out of the rubble of the buildings looking for their parents. They had taken cover in the rubble, hoping that the sand would not find them. I had learned of the effects of the war when I became Hokage, but I had no idea that there was this many children still out on the street. I saw a lot of them in the street this night. Iruka and I were hoping there would be a vacant house big enough to fit all of these children and a few people to take care of them. I also thought of the idea to put up posters for foster parents. Well what do you think?”
“Well I think this would be a very good idea. Maybe I could take some of the older boys into me…”
“No, the definite answer to that is no. We are not trying to use the children we’re trying to help them. I will not let you get these children in your scams.”
“Ok, Ok, jeez, what happened to the danger, fun loving Naruto I used to know. Remember that move you taught me. It’s come in useful. What happened to doing that kind of stuff? You used to be fun, what happened to you, now you’re all…Boring.”
“This is what happened to me.” Naruto unbuttoned his shirt to reveal the biggest, deepest scar Konohamaru had ever seen. “Me and my scouts were playing around one day, and a sand team snuck up on us. My friends were killed, except one. We escaped, but as we were about to make a run for, they
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attack my partner. I jumped in front of him and was struck, with some sort of kunai. It cut deeply into my flesh, right to the ribs on my chest. My partner grabbed hold of me and we fled back to the village. When we got there I was barely alive. Tsunade healed me and I was slowly dying, but she did it, she closed the wound and stopped the bleeding. I felt better at once, but I couldn’t move. I was too weak. I slept for 5 weeks, before I woke up, I had broken my arm when I fell on it and I had a minor slice on my leg, from the second attack they gave me. My other friends were long gone, by the time they found them. Shikamaru told them that there were others and he filled me in on the details when I woke up. After that I promised I would pay more attention. I had almost died and so did my best friend.”
He covered the gash back up. Konohamaru fell back in silence, amazed that such a thing could happen to Naruto. He had always thought Naruto was the strongest person in the world after his grandfather had died. It just didn’t make sense to him. He had met Shikamaru once before and he seemed too lazy to get involved in a battle. He was surprised that Shikamaru had gone on the scouting mission at all.
“I see. So you’re fun days are over now? Well I guess that would make sense. It doesn’t seem right though, one simple mistake can cause that much of a disaster. Well I guess that’s why you’re the hokage, you understand these things, but still what if I make that same mistake, and I could end up like you or your friends. I’m not ready for this job anymore. I can’t carry out this mission, going into the sand village through the forest and ambushing a couple of ninja, I’m scared to do it now, and I don’t think I can. Naruto help me.”
Naruto reached over and slapped him across the face. “Feel better? I know it’s hard being a fool and then growing up and realizing the dangers of the real world, when you’ve always been protected in the fantasy world you created when you were young. It’s not easy accepting that at any moment on a dangerous mission, you or someone close to you could die, but you just have to get through that part. You have to give
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yourself a little push to get started and then the rest comes easy. It’s like a slide, you push to get yourself down and the slide does the rest, takes you to the bottom. I had to learn the dangers of the real world myself. I never had any parents and no one would teach me these things. I had to learn the pain of hatred, seclusion, and loneliness at a young age and there was nobody to get me through it until I was much older. I refused to cry over it though I marched in to battle before anyone else and I was always competing to be better that Sasuke and I didn’t even see what a friendship I had until he was gone and I couldn’t get him back. I still refused to cry, and now I learned the price of being the fool of battle and so will you, but maybe it will be easier for you, than me.”
“Thanks Naruto, well let’s get off this subject and I’ll show you the house. Come on, let’s go.”
“Alright you got it.”

[jacksparrow]

ok here's chapter 2:

Naruto and Konohamaru ran to the house. They passed a lot of children in the streets and Naruto’s eyes started to tear up. Why did this have to happen? It’s not right, it’s not fair, and I know what it feels like to be in this situation, I hoped with me being hokage no one else would share the same fate. I will protect this village, and make sure nothing else happens like this again. I promise with my life.
They kept on moving, through darkness and spots of moonlight. The hospital was barely recognizable, when they got there, Konohamaru signaled for him to be quiet. He whispered this. “A couple of thugs have been living here. We need to get rid of them before the children can live here. It should be big enough for a couple hundreds of children. Remember we need to be quiet.” Naruto nodded his head that he understood. Konohamaru tiptoed to the door and took out a knife. He slipped it into the keyhole and picked the lock. He then motion for Naruto to follow him, but be aware of any movement. Naruto followed obeying. They crept up to the hallway and listened. They could hear voices, they were hushed and they could barely make out the words, but they were clear enough.
“Well the plan is to take down the Hokage, so the sand can infiltrate and take over.”
“But what about that Sasuke kid, he’s friends with the Hokage. He’ll be trouble.”
“Last I heard Sasuke moved in with Orochimaru and then killed him. I doubt he’ll be in the village.”
“Well I heard more than you. He indeed did kill Orochimaru, but he also came back to the village. He’s hiding somewhere in this village. That is our problem.”
“Yeah well he was a never good friend with that fool. It’s amazing that guy even became Hokage. He’ll probably lead the village to destruction before he even dies in battle. He runs into battle without a strategy. How do you think we ambushed him so easily? It was a piece of cake, he’s an idiot!”
Naruto’s ears perked up when he heard that Sasuke was in the village. He was thinking to himself when he heard the thugs call him a fool. Then it struck him, hey were from the Sand Village. He opened his mouth and started to talk, when Konohamaru sprinted over and put his hand over his mouth. He let go and put a finger to his mouth. Naruto nodded hesitantly, Konohamaru moved into the room from the shadows, Naruto followed. They got behind the men sitting in the middle of the room. Konohamaru took out a knife and Naruto did the same. They walked up behind the men and stopped right behind them. Konohamaru held up three fingers, two, one.
“Hey did you hear something?”
“No did you” Naruto and Konohamaru put their kunai to each of the men’s throat and sliced it. They dropped dead, and Konohamaru kicked each one of them to make sure they weren’t faking it.
“Well they’re dead. Now is this house big enough for you,” hollered Konohamaru so that his voice would echo off the walls.
“It’s defiantly big enough for me. This will do perfectly, now all we need is the address and I’ll make some “Help Wanted” posters and we’ll have the children move right in.”
“Alright, sounds like a plan to me. I guess we should head on out and back to our homes.”
“Alright, let’s go.” They headed out, said goodbye to one another and headed separate ways to their homes. Thanks Konohamaru, I really appreciate your help, Naruto thought in the back of his head. While he was walking he felt a small tug on the back of his shirt. He turned around and a little boy was standing there. He was about seven years of age, with shaggy black hair and his clothes were torn. Naruto looked into the boy’s eyes and the boy looked into his. Naruto saw much of himself in the boy.
“How would you like to come home with me?”
“Huh?”
“Come on I’ll take you home.”
Naruto extended his hand and the boy took it and smiled. They walked home together holding hands.
“Tell me what is your name?”
“My name, my name is Kavan, sir.”
“Kavana, eh. Well now you’re Kavan Uzumaki.” Kavan was silent. He was thinking all this over. When they got back to Naruto’s house, Sakura came up and hugged Naruto. She then noticed the little boy.
“Naruto who is this.”
“He is an orphan so he is our adopted son now. His name is Kavan Uzumaki.”
“Welcome Kavan, I guess I’m your new mother now.”
“My-my mother?”
“That’s right.” Kavan ran up and hugged Sakura. Sakura bent down and hugged Kavan. “We should be going inside. Let’s get you to your room.”
“I get a room?”
“Of coarse silly, we wouldn’t make you sleep outside.” Naruto picked up Kavan and carried him to a room.

and there's more to come

[grit]

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!111

[jacksparrow]

thanks. With Pikayasha gone i'm not sure i can continue, she gave me the most feedback. She was the reason for my continuos story line. With her gone i see no reason to continue this story.

[jacksparrow]

ok so i wrote more and i named Sakura's second baby after Pikayasha. Her's the rest:

Naruto picked up Kavan and carried him to a room. Kavan’s new room was gigantic. It was abpout the size of a normal sized backyard. It had a bed with green colored sheets, and the room colors were green and blue. It was the most wonderful thing Kavan had ever seen. He wondered around the room with amazement. He looked back at his new parents and smiled. Yawned and went on the bed and fell asleep. Naruto and Sakura smiled. They left the room and went to bed themselves.
Kavan had been living with Naruto and Sakura for three months. The homless children population had decreased ever since the orphanage had been formed. Children had been adopted and new parents not wishing to make a child have gotten their wish of a child.
Sakura was walking along one day, coming back from the doctors, when she thought she would pay her husband a little visit. She turned left down the street and kept walking. She turned into the building where Naruto hung out and did business and walked to his office. She knocked on his door and the soft voice of her husband said “enter.” She came in and Naruto looked up from his desk, a smile sprang on his face. He ran to hug Sakura and wrapped his arms around her. He stood back.
“Sakura you’re shaking, what is it? Is there something wrong?”
“No nothing is wrong, something wonderful will happen in a few weeks. Naruto I’m going to have another baby.”
“This-this is wonderful, I-I can’t believe it. Wait, boy or girl?”
“It’s a girl, and I’ve already thought of a name, but I’m not going to tell you yet, you have to wait until the baby will be, oh-oh my, I think my water broke.”
“What now three weeks early. Ok wrap your arms around me neck. I’m going to carry you.” He hoisted Sakura into his arms and ran at full speed towards the hospital. They got there very soon, Naruto burst through the doors, and ran to the counter.
“Lord Hokage is something wrong?”
“Yes my wife is about to have another baby. I need a room fast and the best doctors you have in today.’
“Yea of course, right this way.” She led him to a room and he dropped Sakura on the bed. Picked up her hand and held it.
“It’s going to be ok Sakura, be patient. I’ll be right here with you. I’ll be your big strong man.”
“Naruto you can leave if you wish.” The doctor came in and smiled.
“Good day, ok now which of you is having the baby?”
“Uh that would be my wife.”
“Oh of coarse how silly of me. Ok now we are going to make this nice and easy. Now do your stuff.” Sakura got ready and screamed. Naruto took one look and fainted. Hours seemed to pass before Naruto finally woke up in the room, in a chair, next to Sakura holding here baby.
“Oh you’re awake, so much for being my big, strong man.”
“Ok so what’s the bay’s name?
“It’s Pikani Yasha Uzumaki. How that for a name?’
It’s a beautiful name.”

[PikaYasha]

It's still going to come out as a wonderful story,Jackie.Wonderful.

[jacksparrow]

thanks. i'm sooooo glad we're back, i was starting to write poetry and i never do that, EVER!!!!!!!!!!!! here's more:

“It’s a beautiful name.” Pikani opened her eyes and looked into her parent’s faces. She started to babble and her parents smiled. Sakura looked into her baby daughter’s eyes and then fell asleep.
They took the baby home the next day and Naruka and Kavan came running up to Sakura and tried to see the baby.
“That’s it? That’s what a baby looks like, it’s stupid,” Naruto said, “what’s the big deal, and it’s really stupid.”
“Naruka, the baby is not stupid and it’s your little sister. You will learn to treat her with respect, or you will not talk about her at all,” Naruto said.
“Whatever.”
“What about you Kavan, what do you think of the baby,” asked Sakura.
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“I’ve never seen a baby before. It’s strange, why is it’s face so puffy?”
“Well the face doesn’t have any form yet.”
“Oh, ok.” Kavan scooted off to the playroom, and played by himself. Naruka was in his room looking at his picture of his family before Kavan or the baby was in his life. He missed those days, he had gotten most of the attention and his parents had been so proud of him. Iruka had put off teams until tomorrow. Naruka was worrying; he didn’t want to be put in a team with Sasuta. He really wanted to be in a team with Sakanita.
There was a knock on his door. It was late and he should have been asleep. He turned off his light and hopped into bed. He was pretending to sleep, when Naruto entered. He looked to see if Naruka was asleep and then pretended to leave. He then hid under the bed, and waited for Naruka’s next movement. Naruka opened his eyes and looked around. All clear, he thought. He turned on his light and hoped out of bed. He opened his window and climbed up on the fire escape. He then made his way up to the roof.
Naruto followed him cautiously to make sure Naruka didn’t know he was following him. Naruka was already up on the roof, he had plopped himself down near the edge and sat there gazing up at the stars. Naruto crept up behind him and stood there for a moment. He then tightened his muscles ready to pounce. He leaped and grabbed his son and wrestled him to the ground. Naruka fought hesitantly for a few moments, and then realizing it was his father, fought more fiercely.

[PikaYasha]

Aww...like father like son...:):Blush:That was adorable.:)

[jacksparrow]

:laugh: well i think i have more:

They tumbled around, each fighting to be on top. Both were sweating immensely. Naruka was getting tired and losing breathe. Naruto was getting tired but kept going. He was putting Naruka to the challenge, to make sure he was ready to be in a ninja team. He wanted to protect his son. He wasn’t ready to lose him yet. He wondered if his daughter would become a ninja. It would be shocking, being that both of her parents are ninja.

[PikaYasha]

Wonderful!I love it so much!!:)Not just because of me myself and I,but because your a good writer!:)

[jacksparrow]

ok i finally have more. here it is:

They tumbled around, each fighting to be on top. Both were sweating immensely. Naruka was getting tired and losing breathe. Naruto was getting tired but kept going. He was putting Naruka to the challenge, to make sure he was ready to be in a ninja team. He wanted to protect his son. He wasn’t ready to lose him yet. He wondered if his daughter would become a ninja. It would be shocking, being that both of her parents are ninja. He kept fighting back and eventually they
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broke apart. Naruka had thrown Naruto off of him and they both skidded on the roof. They got up and looked at each other. Naruto closed one eye and looked at his son with a cold heart. Naruka looked into his father’s eyes and felt the same feeling. They both felt tired and were drenched in sweat. Then Naruto collapsed. Naruka smiled and stood up. He walked a few steps and then swaggered, fell down, and passed out.
Sakura went into Naruka’s room an hour later. She was looking for Naruto, and when she found the room empty, her dropped the clean laundry she was carrying and ran around the room panicking. “Where is my son, where is my husband. What happened in here? Oh My Goodness, where are they. What if they’ve been stolen, I…” At that moment Naruto came through the window carrying a sleeping Naurka. He placed him in his bed and covered him up. He then went out the door and Sakura followed, closing the door behind her. They went to bed and Sakura glared at Naruto.
“What? What did I do?”
“You sent me into a panic. Where were you and why wasn’t Naruka asleep?”
“We were up on the roof battling and…”
“Ugh not again, I want you two to stop with those battles up on the roof. What would happen if you both fell off of the roof, it’s not safe.”
“You know what I think?”
“What do you think…I” Naruto fell asleep just as Sakura was finishing her sentence. She groaned and went to sleep herself. Sakura had an uneasy dream. It was of her childhood, the day when Sasuke left.
You’ll never be strong enough. You don’t have enough hate. You will seek me out for greater power. You’ll want it and you won’t be able to resist it. Sasuke was sitting on a branch, thinking to himself. He thought about his brother, and his dream to avenge his clan by killing his brother. His thoughts then turned to Orochimaru. He wanted to drive Sasuke into confusion making him seek him out for a quest for greater power. He glared at the tree. He needed to become stronger
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than anyone, stronger than Naruto, Neji, Lee, and of course Gaara. Naruto kept getting stronger all the time and Sasuke wasn’t, he was convincing himself that he was reaching his limit, but that couldn’t be. Just then a shurikan whipped past him and attached itself to the tree. Sasuke looked around alarmed. He couldn’t see anyone, he made the hand sign for his sharingan to unleash and his eyes turned red, and two little coma shaped dots appeared in his eyes. He looked around again and discovered it was an illusion jutsu, genjutsu. Just then a man appeared next to him and struck him in the side. Sasuke quickly regained his balance, by swinging himself around the branch and placing his feet under him. The man disappeared and Sasuke looked around. He caught movement to his left, he jumped up in the nick of time. He had almost been cut with a kunai.
“So you’re pretty good Uchiha. Let’s see you handle two of us.” At that second a girl appeared, and she was fast to do so. They came at Sasuke with full speed, but Sasuke was too quick for them. He grabbed their arms and jumped over them, kicking them in the face in the process and landing on his feet, after a quick spin in the air. “So you think you’re pretty tough, well I guess all of us should come out.” At that moment three more men came out of hiding and ran at Sasuke. One of them stopped and started to chew on something. He then spat it out and threw it at Sasuke, who was unaware and was strapped to the tree by sticky spider webs. Sasuke squirmed until he realized he couldn’t get out.
“What do you weirdoes want with me anyway.”?
“Well since you ask, we were sent here by Lord Orochimaru, to come get you. He said you about ready to join him. He realizes your need for greater power and says he can help you. He can give you the power you need to defeat a certain someone he would not say,” spoke the girl.
“How does he know of this? What gives him the right to do this? Why is he trying to help me? What his deal?”
“There is no deal Sasuke, he wishes for you to be happy.”
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“Fine then, if he wants to help, then I’ll let him.”
“Good boy, meet us back here in an hour. And tell nobody of this.” They all jumped up and left at ninja speed. Sasuke looked at them good and hard. The spider webs, broke apart and he was released. He got up quickly and sprinted to his house. Once there he packed his backpack and left. He was about to make it when he heard someone calling his name.
“Sasuke, Sasuke wait for me.” It was Sakura, she was calling my name, she probably wanted something stupid, like to flirt with me again. I don’t have time for this. Sasuke turned around to see Sakura come closer to him.
“Sasuke you silly, didn’t you hear me calling you. I…hey where ae you going?”
“I am going to get stronger. I am going to begin my quest for greater power and I will not let anyone get in my way, not even you.” Sakura looked at him confused and then it hit her, Orochimaru.
“He will seek me out, he will want greater power, he won’t be able to resist. It.”
“Sasuke no you can’t go, you can’ join up with Orochimaru. He’s going to use you.”
“No you don’t understand. This is something I need to do and you’re NOT GOING TO STOP ME. GET IT?” Tears started to form in Sakura’s eyes.
“Sasuke you can’t. Please don’t go, we need you here. PLEASE don’t do this.” Sasuke started to move closer to Sakura and he looked into her eyes, all she saw was cold hatred. She was scared, her eyes started tearing again, she truly saw what has become of Sasuke. All of a sudden she went cold. Sasuke had five-palmed her stomach and she was passing out. She looked at him again, breathing deeply, trying hard to stay conscious. She fell into his arms and he lay her on the bench.
“I am sorry Sakura, but you’re not going to stop me. This is my destiny and you won’t mess it up, with your crying and tears and pleading. I must do this.” With that he left to meet the other. Sakura looked at him once more and then passed out cold.
Sakura woke up in her bed and looked around the room. It was around midnight. Her eyes teared up and she got up out of bed and walked to the sunroom. She sat herself down abd started to cry. She fell asleep there and woke up in the morning, and cried again.

[PikaYasha]

Poor Sakura.I remember that scene.It was sad and well....Sakura,That's too sad not to cry......
http://th217.photobucket.com/albums/cc225/heather_sheba/th_thth031.gif

[PikaYasha]

Okay!Thanks for telling the story to us!:)

[narutohokage]

Your story is great and I want to know what happens next. Please update

[jacksparrow]

ok here's more:
“Sakura, Sakura where are…oh. What’s wrong, have you been crying? Your eyes are all red. Sakura, what’s the matter with you,” Naruto said worried.
“Nothing it’s just, I miss him so much. He left and he hasn’t come back. I can’t live this way, I should have stopped him when I had the chance.” Naruto knew she was talking about Sasuke. His face darkened. He knew Sasuke had left to join Orochimaru, he had regretted it. He should have brought him back when he had the chance. He couldn’t, the others had taken him, when he should have been grabbing Sasuke and taking him home. He looked at Sakura and she looked at him. They shared a moment and then Sakura grabbed him and cried her eyes out into his shirt. Why would Sasuke do this to us, he would never, has never been this way. Sure he’s been teasing me ever since we got teamed up, but to make Sakura cry like this, that’s just cruel. You even hurt me. Sasuke, why, why do this to your teammates.
Why, because I need to defeat him. My brother, Naruto, I must kill him and restore my clan.
Sasuke is that you? Is it really you?
Yes Naruto it’s me. Why?
Why what, why do you and Sakura care if I left? What’s the deal?
What’s the deal? Why you, I can’t believe you would ask that. We are worried, we didn’t want you to leave, we tried to stop you and get you back. We are your friends Sasuke, dang you Sasuke! We care about you.

[PikaYasha]

If you're saying that Sasuke died then...well......*sigh*Poor dude.I know you're not though,you're saying that Sasuke has found a way to slip into people's consciousness.Am I correct or what?

[jacksparrow]

yep. he's talking to Naruto in his mind.

[PikaYasha]

Cool!I got something correct for once!

[jacksparrow]

i got more and it might be a little hard to follow:

. We are your friends Sasuke, dang you Sasuke! We care about you. You have no feelings at all. You could care less about us; you think we’re all below you. All you care about is killing your brother. You don’t even think about how good life is, you don’t even realize you have friends. You
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probably don’t even care. I’ve had it with you, if I were there right now I kick your butt. I am Hokage now if you didn’t know. I’ve gotten my dream. What have you got? Nothing, that’s what. You’re self-centered only caring about your dream. I at least care about people and treat them as an equal.
Shut up Loser, you know nothing about the way I feel. You think I hate everyone; I can’t stand you, well your wrong. I just don’t show emotions. It’s true I can’t stand you, but I put that aside, to do what we must. I don’t care what you think of me. I…I… whatever!
So…so you do care, somewhat. You know I’m right; you have friends who care about you, you just don’t know how to react. You think you’re too cool to care, but you are just a jerk. I can’t stand you.
Humph. I don’t care, Loser.
Sasuke what are you… Sasuke, where are you going?
Back to consciousness, and you’re not coming with me.
Sasuke don’t you… he left. He’s shut me out. I can’t talk to him. Was that even him, it couldn’t have been. He’s just being a jerk. I…I…ugh! Naruto put his head down on Sakura’s and gritted his teeth. Sakura was still crying. It was around ten when they finally returned to the house.
“Mommy, Daddy where are you,” called Naruka, “Kavan is being weird, and I… uh?”

[PikaYasha]

I followed.The only part that was weird was when Naruto laid his head on Sakura's.What was that supposed to mean....?
Still,it's a great story.

[jacksparrow]

you know i'm not sure, it's just i guess showing that he's down but also loving Sakura to make her feel better. i'll have more soon anyway.

[PikaYasha]

Okay.Thanks for letting us hear it.:)