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secretwepon
11-10-2007, 04:17 PM
Ok i'm making a story but i'm not telling the story just yet.
At the moment i'm just telling you the main characters

Jack Starlight/SecretWepon
Powers:can create weapons instantly
Age:21

Steven Starlight/Meltdown
Powers:when he gets mad his hands go massive and he gets stonger for a time
Age:22

Pete Starlight/Flame
Powers:controls fire and lava and create it.
Age:24

Heather Starlight
Age:22

Rachel Starlight/DragonHeart
Powers: Telepath,Can pick up and throw fire,Telekinisis,can fly,shoots flames from her mouth.
Age:3

Jenny Kizzen
Age:20

secretwepon
11-14-2007, 02:47 PM
Chapter One
This is just the first page


Jack Starlight, a secret agent like his cousin Steven.Today was his 21st birthday, everyone that knew what he did was there,exept Pete.
Jack was very comfy on the couch,talking to Steven.Then suddenly the lights went dim,then out. The only difference,when they came back on there were 10 ninjas at the door with swords and other physical weapons.
The leader of the ninjas,Jason,told the ninjas to hold everyone hostage then he peered around for Jack. He wasn't there.
Jack and Steven charged in and each punched a ninja in the face
they then went to defeat more ninjas.Jack was first to do so by diving down to the floor then shooting back up uppercuting one in the face. Steven threw a ninja into a table damaging it's ribs,then Jack hit one in the gut with his knee.Jason punched Steven in the face forcing him to the floor, his head colided with the concrete.
Jack punched a ninja twice in the stomach before throwing him through a table then he elbowed Jason in the stomach then threw him at the wall.
Steven was helped up by Jack then they each kicked a ninja in the knees and punched them in the chest.Two ninjas were left Steven made a signal to Jack, he nodded then ran backwards then forwards
and ran up Steven who was on the floor he jumped off the back of Steven and hit the ninjas crisp in the jaw with punches, they went down almost emediatly.
Jack ran up to Jason and punched him in the face.They lifted him out into a helicopter that come for the ninjas.
"Steven"Jack said "where are you going?" he stared at him angrily.
"I'm going to a pub to get a drink" Steven answered, "you comin'?"
Jack nodded and they walked off.

Please tell me if you like it and i will write more

secretwepon
11-30-2007, 03:19 PM
Second page

As they walked they met up to Pete Starlight, Jack's brother.Pete was carrying a radiation tanker.
"Why weren't you there," Jack asked angrily with a dark stare.
"I'm busy," He replied arrogently, "can't you see."
Jack looked over at Steven who was concentraiting on lighting a cigarete.
"Steven," Jack asked,Steven shook forgeting Jack was even there throwing a lighter accedentaly at the tank, It burst into flames as jack dived over Steven knocking him out the way.They ran home leaving the sky bright from the flames. Pete was lying on the ground in agony as his eyes glowed, then turned red from the radiation.Flame is born.
Steven and Jack had eventuly reached the pub when a glass was thrown at Steven.Steven shouted back in anger, steam coming out his ears.Suddenly his hands grew and energy crackled as he threw a street sign at him.Jack tryed to calm him down but was thrown into the wall.
"Steven you may only be five foot nine but your pretty powerfull" Jack said clenching his ribs.Steven glared at him but the anger had gone.Jack and Steven strolled back home everything was weird tonight.

Mrdemolisher
11-30-2007, 03:23 PM
A 3-year-old can pick up and throw fire?!?!?!?

secretwepon
11-30-2007, 03:39 PM
Sure why not. She dosent do that yet