View Full Version : *A Naruto Story*
PikaComet
11-12-2007, 07:40 PM
Well here you go!I made this story and i hope you like it!
Chapter 1.The Freaky Day~
Naruto was walking with Sasuke when he said,"Sasuke!Who is that!?""What?Oh
Her.Well..um..She is my sister."Sasuke said."You Have a sister or is it just itachi in a dress?:laugh:"Her Name is Sakia Uchiha."Sasuke said back."Well ...
I really though that was itachi in a dress!Naruto said to Sasuke."Well hi!What's your name?"Sakia said."Who me?"Naruto said to Sakia."Yes you!The one in Yellow!"Sakia said."I'm Naruto Uzumaki.I dream of being a hokage and to rule this village so others might like and trust me."Naruto said."Wow that is a nice dream."Sakia said looking and holding Sasuke's hand."Sakia i like you to meet Kiba."Hi Kiba!I'm Sakia Uchiha"Sakia said."That name....but-------that's
--Sasuke!Is she your sister?"Kiba said."Yes!"Sasuke said shouting.
~To Be Contined~
PikaYasha
11-12-2007, 09:10 PM
Awesome!I like it a bunch.
Itachi in a dress.....lol.:laugh:I can see it now...:laugh:
PikaComet
11-13-2007, 04:44 PM
Thanks!I worked on the next chapter.More on the way!:
Chapter 2~Trouble!!!!~
Everyone gathered around and Sasuke and his sister,Sakia they were famous!Everyone asked things like;Sasuke!You have a sister?;Is she you sis?.Sasuke
grabbed Sakia and ran off!They ran into a near by cave."We should be safe here now,but i'm not sure....."Sasuke said.Sakia looked around and found a shiriken,a headband,and a kuniknife from the village.It said,Ino Yamanaka.
"Ino?"Sasuke wondered.Sakia saw a huge snake in the cave and it was glaring at Sasuke."Let's get out of here!"Sakia said.They ran off to a Town called,'Hearthone city'it was a nice place with shops,diners,and houses everywhere!"Can we stay?oh pretty please sas...uke?"Sakia said."Well we have to.we can't go anywhere else for now..."Sasuke said back.
To Be Contined~
tjthemaster
11-13-2007, 05:59 PM
This story is pretty good, infact it is better then good it's great
PikaComet
11-15-2007, 05:49 PM
Thanks!I'm almost done with the next chapter..
PikaYasha
11-17-2007, 04:10 AM
Hope you can get it up soon!I like that it's very interesting.:)Great job!
PikaComet
11-17-2007, 11:53 AM
here's the next chapter!
Chapter 3.The Plan
Sasuke met up with Sakia and they ran into one of there best friends...A person named....Sanita.They kept on walking and saw naruto and itachi talking
over something."Should we go and help big bro?"Sakia asked."No.Let Naruto dicide rather to live or die.It's his life that's on the line"Sasuke said walking along.:circle:"All right.After all,you know best"Sakia said.Then she heard a wisper between naruto and itachi,"Shhhhh!Do you want them to hear
us?Keep it down!"Naruto wispered"ok!"They kept chatering.
To Be Contined~
PikaYasha
11-17-2007, 02:16 PM
OOOOH!!!!Naruto's in trouble and he don't know it!!!!fufufufufufu....
Can't wait for the next chappy!
PikaComet
11-18-2007, 07:29 PM
ok!I made the next chapter!
Chapter 4.The Secret Plan~
Psssssst!Lets get out of here!Sakia heard!"Naruto wispered
Sakia looked away and kept walking.What was itachi up to?He looked at sasuke in a weird way."Sasuke look out!"Sakia screamed."Now i got you!"Itachi said.He grabbed naruto and threw a kuni-knife at sasuke.Sasuke ran away and picked up Sakia and took off!They watched naruto run around and around.They hurried off to a temple where they rested.
To Be Contined~
sorry for the short story!More on the way!
PikaYasha
11-18-2007, 07:35 PM
Naruto is an idiot!But thats what makes him the best of the show!:laugh::laugh::laugh::laugh:
PikaComet
11-19-2007, 04:36 PM
here's the rest....
itachi poked naruto in a place that you wouldn't like to be poked.They ran off!
No one knew where they were going....Then Sasuke froze right in front of Sakia and fell back."I got you sasuke!"Sakia said.
i know its little....more on the way!
To Be Contined~
PikaYasha
11-19-2007, 07:14 PM
Hm.....Interesting.....:oI love it.:)
PikaComet
11-23-2007, 07:11 PM
can someone close this for me?What i said in the "A Naruto Tale"Thread means
this one too.
PikaYasha
11-23-2007, 07:22 PM
WHAT?!?!?!But this one was so good......:bawling:
I hope that I can hear the rest sometime later!!!!
http://th217.photobucket.com/albums/cc225/heather_sheba/th_thth031.gif
PikaComet
11-25-2007, 04:01 PM
ok.
Sakia grabbed sasuke and went somewhere were it was quiet.too quiet.Sakia heard a weird noise.she ran to see what was it.it was a storm.she tried to save sasuke from the storm.in fact she moved very fast.as fast as a plane in fact.She was getting medichine to heal sasuke's arm.Suddenly sakia saw a demond shaped shadow in the forest.she felt scared but not that much."YOu want sasuke?Good luck finding him!"She said.she put him in a safe place to heal and stood in front of him.she threw pepper spay at the demond.
PikaYasha
11-25-2007, 04:11 PM
:clap:Nice!I like it SOOOO much!And well....Zbestthereis,that was a lot nicer then your other post.Thank you for doing that.:)
pikapika95
11-25-2007, 05:02 PM
nice story.
PikaComet
03-21-2008, 11:47 AM
Thanx.
Sakia runs of behind the shadow.She knew her friends were in danger and they would soon be found.Sakia threw herself in the creatures path.
Sakia: Hey ferret face!Try to get me!
Iavgotregigias6
03-23-2008, 04:53 PM
i like it
vBulletin® v3.7.2, Copyright ©2000-2008, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.