A Naruto Tale

[PikaComet]

This is a naruto tale that i made.


A Naruto Tale

By PikaComet~


Chapter 1.
Life as a ninja.


You wake up one sunny day. Your name is Sakia . You have long black hair
And black eyes. You rush downstairs to beat your rival, Sakura.You race her everyday to see who sits next to a boy named Sasuke Uchiha.You beat her. You sit next to Sasuke and stick your tongue
Out at Sakura. Sasuke looks away and blushes. He moves closer to you but you
Feel unsafe. Knowing that Sasuke might try to kill you, you try to move away from him. But you think that this is your chance! If someone saw that Sasuke would get near you, kiss you, or hug you, you might be the most famous girl!
Sasuke gets closer to you and you two almost kissed. The problem was that Naruto buttes in and throws you off the table. “Naruto! I was so close!!!! Why did you butt in like that!? I will destroy you!” Sasuke yells while picking you up. He was so mad that he almost ran right past you.
“Sasuke!” You yell. He looks at you but can’t stop. Naruto finally gets tired and Sasuke finds him. “I’m sorry Sasuke! I didn’t know that Sakia was your dream girl!” Naruto says. “Well you better be!” Sasuke screams. “Now Sakia will
Hate me because I left her.” Sasuke said. When he arrives home, he sees you
Talking with another boy named, Kiba. Then Kiba leaves. You look in a bush and
See Sasuke hiding in it. You wonder why and run to him. “W-Were you spying at
Me?” You ask Sasuke. “No. I was just…ok you got me.” Sasuke said. “W-Why were you doing that?” You ask him again. “I thought that you liked Kiba. No me.”
Sasuke said. “You know that’s not true. Why did you think that?” You ask him
one more time. “Because of Naruto.” Sasuke replies. Later that night you see him looking at the moon….crying. You try to hide to see what is happening. Suddenly, he starts to cry even more. You feel bad and go talk to him.
“What’s wrong? Do you hate me?” You ask. “No. But I will if you tell anyone that I was crying.” He said. “Your secret is safe with me.” You say back to him.

To Be Continued~

[PicachuStar]

UM...LOVE IT!When did you become a story writer?

[PikaYasha]

It's nice,but it confused me at the beginning.No offense,just make it a bit more organized.

[mikepie]

awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D:D:D i like it!!!:D

[PikaComet]

ok.i will change it.how is it now?

[PicachuStar]

sorry to spam but.........Please don't stop writing stories!Your stories are great
!!!!!!!Please!I appoligize for pikamaster's words.he didn't mean to upset you!!
Write the story your way!It doesn't matter what others think!!!!If you like it you like it.No one can change that.If they think its wrong,they're missing out
on a great story!!!!!sorry to spam again but its going to close soon anyway.

[PikaYasha]

Not ot spam,but like PicachuStar said,I didn't mean it in a hurtful way.Just that I didn't get it at first.....Okay...now I'm leaving....

[TigerStar]

I agree.its is so good!I do apoligize too for those that have hurt you.Ok i know what you are all thinking.OMG its TigerStar!I thought she left!Well i didn't
.After i heard what happened to pikacomet then i went on as soon as i could.

[PicachuStar]

Not ot spam,but like PicachuStar said,I didn't mean it in a hurtful way.Just that I didn't get it at first.....Okay...now I'm leaving....
sorry picayasha.you didn't do anything.i ment to put pikamaster insted of pikayasha.i'm sorry but i get confused.pikamaster is not a member but that's my neighbor's "tittle".he is
such a jerk.look what he wrote to her in a different website!


Originally Sent by PikaMaster

Is that friend of yours what was it...oh yes!Robin with you?She is such a loser!

[PikaComet]

you still spell it wrong.its PikaYasha.not picayasha.i think you need to take spelling lessons.:laugh:Ok that's enough of that.stay on topic you two.by that i mean TigerStar and PikachuStar(HA!What do you think of that!?)Ok i'm almost done with the next chapter.

[Zbestthereis]

Horrible. Looks like a nine year old wrote it. Btw if you want to write a story like this make up characters instead of using those from a popular anime. After all i doubt sasuke is the type to cry. horrible

[PikaComet]

ok that's it.i can't stand it anymore.i'm leaving and this time for real.i do apoligize Lukario,Pikapika95,and most of all to you pikayasha.you hurt my feelings really bad now.i'm giving this account to tigerstar.you no longer will see me on.it will be from now on tigerstar that's on.i will give my last story to pikayasha.she was the only one here who really liked it.



Good bye everyone.i hope you remember me.

[GamerGuy]

Horrible. Looks like a nine year old wrote it. Btw if you want to write a story like this make up characters instead of using those from a popular anime. After all i doubt sasuke is the type to cry. horrible

Grow up, Simon Cowell. Stop complaining like a two-year old and act your age. Oh, wait, if you act your age, you'll still whine like a brat. Who cares if Sasuke cries? Who cares if it looks like a nine year old wrote it?

[grit]

ya she has the right to do whatever she feels like, its her story.

[GamerGuy]

PikaComet, don't leave!

[sniperman]

Horrible. Looks like a nine year old wrote it. Btw if you want to write a story like this make up characters instead of using those from a popular anime. After all i doubt sasuke is the type to cry. horrible
Shut up Zbestthereis
I personally H8 you because you hurt one of my friends feelings and
now you made them leave,anyway a nine yea rold could write better than you
so do yourself a favour and shut up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OH and also i likes your story pikacomet :)

[GamerGuy]

PC'S story was awesome. Zbestthereis, I'd like to see you try and write a story. I bet it'll be good as crap.

[PikaComet]

Thanks everyone!:)i'm still wondering.......i will pm everyone the story i made that was going to be posted here.

[PikaYasha]

Yeah,and not to spam here,but Zbestthereis.....he is a really mean guy.Don't listen to him,PikaComet.He sent me a really mean PM and it was NOT and I mean WAS NOT a nice one.I say,that even if someone says that you're a horrible story writer,or anything like that,then you should just ignore them because you ARE a good story writer.Not a bad one.A GOOD ONE.If someone says that you are the worst person on the site,ignore them.Because even if you're not the BEST you are still WHO YOU ARE!!!Even if you're not the kindest person(which is SOOOOO not true),again,you are still WHO YOU ARE.If someone says that your story was written like a 2 year old,then they are lying because you did a great job and...YOU ARE BEING WHOEVER Y7OU ARE.

I'm really sorry that I spammed,but I wanted to make sure I got that clear.And a double-sorry,for PikaComet.

[PikaComet]

Thanks for that PikaYasha.i will stay..and thank you everyone who likes my story.if i would have left,i would have been in trouble because tigerstar went on vacation.talk about timing:laugh:ok i made the rest of my story:

You still feel unsafe. Knowing Sasuke since he was little, you know he never acted this way. “Wait a sec.” You say Angrily. “How do I know you are Sasuke?” You said. “Hmm!” He says and looks away. “I don’t care if your mad! I know you are not Sasuke!” You said to the stranger. Suddenly, Naruto clashed into Him. He threw everything he had and tried to protect you. After that, he says hi and goes home. You do the same. You lay down in a soft, feathery bed and go to sleep.
The Next Day~
You wake up feeling awful. Then you get out of bed and see your Kitten, Sasuke. You named it that because it had black fur, and a little blue too. He even had black eyes! You and Sasuke lived alone. You and him had cats only for pets and you would be out all day. You start walking and suddenly run into Sasuke. You don’t care much and keep walking. Sasuke looks at you in a weird way. Like if something is missing. You and him always walked the same route to get to the academy for young ninja. And you would always get close to him and say things like: Hi Sasuke!
Good morning. But this morning you didn’t. He seemed awfully strange this morning. You keep walking and pay no attention. You reach the academy first and take your seat. Naruto the crazy ninja looked at you all day. Iruka, your teacher walks in. “Take your seats everyone! Today is the big day! We will test you by checking if you could do the
Shadow Clone Jutsu . If you pass, you get to be in a team. Each team will have 4 ninja alright?” He said. “OK!” Everyone said. “Ok. Sakia, you go first, Sasuke goes next, and Hinata goes last and so on.” He said. You are one of the best ninja in the academy. Hinata, your best friend, has a crush on Naruto. You kinda like him for what he did last night. You and a bunch of others pass. “OK! I have selected the teams! The best ninja go first.” Iruka said. Your
Heart starts pounding. “Team one: Sasuke, Naruto, Sakia, and………Hinata!” He said. “Yippy!” You think. You wanted to be with Hinata since you were little. Sasuke on the other hand says, no surprise there. He has a face that would make you laugh if you saw it. It was a “Oh Great! I’m in a team with tow abscessed girls and a crazy boy. Oh that’s just great!” face. After it’s over, you and Hinata walk home. “Thanks for walking me home Hinata!” You said.
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[Mrdemolisher]

Horrible. Looks like a nine year old wrote it. Btw if you want to write a story like this make up characters instead of using those from a popular anime. After all i doubt sasuke is the type to cry. horrible

What is your problem?
In just about every post you make, you insult someone.
Keep your comments to yourself if they're bad comments.
We don't need people insulting each other on this forum.
PikaComet, don't listen to him.
Ignore him.
Everyone else here loves your story.
It's a great story.

[PikaComet]

Don't worry.I'll ignore him like you said.And thank you everyone who likes my story.