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PikaComet
12-03-2007, 05:09 PM
This is a story that i thought that some people would like to read.Tell me what you think of it and rate it 1-10 Ok?I mixed it up with some pokemon.



A Fox Based Story~

There was once a fox named,Ninetales whose best friend,Flareon came came to her house.Ninetales was a yellowish color.(Look at my avatar).Flareon was Red and Orange.Ninetales played with Flareon for hours and hours untill Flareon
had to go home.When Flareon moved,Ninetales was very sad.She started to :bawling:Cry.One day,she met a fox named, Volpix.They became best friends untill "She thought.Suddenly she thought the tv might hold the answer.
She turned it to Channel 25.Where the news took place.Pikachu,a famose reporter was on."Yes this is terror to our town!The huge comet,is coming strait
to Rainbow Bridge!"Pikachu said.Ninetales thought for a sec."Wait a minute!That's where i'm at!"Ninetales thought.She packed up her stuff and she ran out of the town.


To Be Continued~
Iavgotregigias6
12-03-2007, 05:16 PM
wow I thought that was exalent 10/10 :thumbsup:
PikaComet
12-03-2007, 06:24 PM
this is why he is one of my best friends^
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PikaYasha
12-03-2007, 06:56 PM
10/10!Agreed!:)Wonderful!
mia12
12-03-2007, 07:01 PM
Yeah 10/10!!!!!! It was awesome!!!
PikaComet
12-04-2007, 04:17 PM
Thank You!Eeveryone who posted here so far are my best friends.I have more that one you know.


Chapter 2.Comet Trouble


Ninetales felt sad about something.Then she thought,"Wait a second!I'm not scared!"She ran back to town.Almost everyone was gone.She jumped with one leap and found herself where the comet was charging.She hit it with her Overheat.The comet broke into a million peices."Ninetales!!!"Everyone said.
Soon she formed a rescue team.Her two friends,Flareon and Eevee were in it.
They had to rescue a young fox named,Rox.They found the little fox and brought him back to the town.


I know it's not my best.Rate it 1-10.
mia12
12-04-2007, 08:45 PM
No, it's really good. 9/10. It's not as good as the first but still really good.:)
PikaYasha
12-04-2007, 09:01 PM
Yeah.It was cool,but the first one rocked.Not to get mean.....:(
9/10.Good.
PikaComet
12-05-2007, 04:29 PM
as i said before,it's not my best.I've been really busy lately so i had to make a short story.
PikaComet
12-05-2007, 07:28 PM
This,is my 300th post.i thought i would use it here of all places.More stories coming up!
mia12
12-11-2007, 10:49 PM
That's good to hear PikaComet. You're stories are AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
PikaComet
03-31-2008, 05:02 PM
Thanx.I like yours too.I'm almost done with the next ones.