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jacksparrow
12-15-2007, 05:18 PM
his is a story i made up. let me know if i should continue. This is the first part.

Sora and Riku have been your past legend. Now it is your time to hold the legendary weapon. The keyblade is yours, take it in your hand and weild it well.

Jake woke up suddenly. He had just been having a dream where this old man had been talking about a legendary weapon. he said it was his to weild, he had also said something about Sora and Riku, whoever they were. He now lay awake in the early morning, he sat up and looked around his bedroom. He had a medium sized bedroom. In the right corner was his bed and nesxt to it on the left was his night dresser. He was sittin across from his tv. He had been watching it the day before, maybe that was where he dgo the weird dream. His door was to the right of the tv. He turned around and opened the window, he like sleeping in front of the window. He stared out into the town. it was a great town. The town was named after the darkness was demolished. Twightlight Square was just outside his window. The people were just waking up. He decided he should get to the hang out early.

PikaYasha
12-15-2007, 05:20 PM
Again,I am blown away by your stories,Jack.Great job on it.

jacksparrow
12-15-2007, 05:29 PM
thanx. i'll continue it.

Jake got up and got dressed in his normal clothes. He wore baggy black shorts that went down past his knees. He wore a Red t-shirt with a black half jacket over top. The also wore One black glove with the fingers cut out. he ran downstairs and grabbed an apple to eat and went to the hideout. He ran through the town and passed many of his friends in the town and waved to them. He got to the hang out and halted, something wasn't right.

PikaYasha
12-15-2007, 05:31 PM
Again,blown away by your magnificence.Great.Wonderful impact.

jacksparrow
12-15-2007, 05:37 PM
Cool...

jake hesitantly stepped inside and was grabbed by a balck figure. he struggled to be let go and screamed HELP! He felt like he was being swallowed up by darkness, everything around him went dark. He stopped squirming and opened his eyes, he looked into the yellow eyes of a monster and fell. He fell through darkness and couldn't even breath for a few minutes. he struggled to be let go, but it was too late, his feet met the floor and he stood surrounded by darkness and he was alone. He looked around for some sign of life and he decided he wanted out. He ran forward, the platform he was on shattered into a million peices and he dived to the ground. He screamed for help and just as he was going to hit the ground he landed on the platform, not hard but a soft landing.

PikaYasha
12-15-2007, 05:39 PM
Awesome,yet again.(I truly don't know where I'm getting this stuff from)

jacksparrow
12-15-2007, 05:40 PM
What stuff? any way i thought up more:

He looked around, he took a step forward, then another step, and another. He was in the middle qhen he finally realized he was not alone. He turned around and there was a man in the darkness of the shadows with him. He was a strange man, from the shadows all you could see was he was wearing a dark cloak, it looked black and it had lots of pockets and zippers.

"Hey who-who's there," called jake.
"I have come to see you, your world will be swallowed by darkness very soon," said the strange man," I came here to look at your world before it fades with the darkness. You and your fellow towns people will cease to exist."
"Well whoever you are stop frieking me out like this, huh where'd you come from?"
"That has been said to me before, but not by you." Jake turned around for a minute to make a run for it, but he quickly discarded the thought and faced the stranger. He was gone.
"Huh, hey whe-where'd you go?"